Above here are drafts I’ve played around with. When starting This project I knew I wanted to create the wavy lines around the body for the movement but I didn’t know which emotion I should choose. I played around with them and ultimately choose surprised.
For me, the focal point are the lashes. It’s the first thing I see as it is pure white and dramatic. Because of this, I do get some sort of surprise from it! The movement for me is a bit flat but I think you did a good job trying to create shock waves.
The eyelash is so grabbing my sight! It is so creative the using the horizontal expansion.