Part A:
According to Lamott, writing a first draft is about the process. She said that a good way to start writing is to write down any thoughts that come to mind on the page. I agree with this because …
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Shitty First Drafts – Diego
Part A:
Writing a first draft is more about the process because each draft will be revised and be a slightly different variation from the original. As Lamott states in the excerpt “the first draft is the down draft. The …
Writing task: Single story – Dylan Merchant
Outline
- Intro: Back to school
- Slacking in school
- Winter Scene
- Teacher confrontation
- Studying
- When hard work paid off
The beginning of my junior year of high school was a very weird time for me. Coming from such heavy isolation, it …
Writing Task Resilience – Nyazia B
Working outline:
- Intro – What happened to make me believe i was failing
- How i decided to go about it and let it shape me into someone i believed i was
- How i overcome it and let the situation push
Writing Task Saved – Diego
I. Interest – The first in my life I noticed my interest in architecture.
II. Quarantine – Online education altered my ability to concentrate on my education.
III. Mr. Adegbie’s Class – Architecture class that had on hands assignments.
IV. …
Saved – Bri
My Working Outline
- Intro: a glimpse of how I don’t pay attention in class and how I’m always late
- A scene of how I found out about the club I want to join
- The talk I had with my guidance
Writing Task: Resilience – Belinda
OUTLINE
I. Intro
II. The Learning Journey As a Waitress
III. Realization + Thanking My Coworkers & Aunt
Crawling Out Of My Shell
In the summer of 2023, I started my very first job at the age of 18 with …
Writing Task Resilience — Joshua A.
I. Intro- Hard going up with African
II. In Social Studies class
III. Scene with a Kid in my class
IV. The realization
Being African growing up was challenging due to the fact people only believed Africans have no water …
Writing Task Resilience–Savion
I. Intro Talk about how I fractured my foot
II. How my brother helped me
III. How I dealt with school.
IV. What it taught me
V. How I overcame and grew.
Resilience
December 1st 2021. I was feeling great. …
Writing Task: Resilience – Dessire
Outline-
I- 1. Introduce my parents and how they only know Spanish. 2. State how I only knew Spanish until I started school. 3. Talk about learning to fully understand English and Spanish in order to translate between the two.…
