After reading over Professors Wu’s end comments on my FD 1 , I plan to add a few more scenes throughout my story in the middle. Also I plan to break up my run on sentences and add more descriptive language to give the reader visuals. I will break up a few of my paragraphs and start new ones with dialogue and more details included to give a scene and get rid of fragments.
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