Writing Task Saved – Diego

My high school experience was not extraordinary, my report cards contained A’s and C’s. In class I would always find the desk farthest away from my teachers. Although homework was barely given out, I always managed to not complete it during class time to have something to do at home. I would live buried in assignments, leaving it to complete them until the last minute. I did not find anything harmful in it, then. I always found a way to make my life very challenging, focusing my energy on the simplest task. That was further exacerbated during quarantine. The fine line between education and private life blurred while stuck in my 600 square foot apartment. From morning until midnight, I would always be found doing class work. It was as I were programmed like a robot, endlessly repeating the same code on which there was no resetting. It was difficult to exit the loop as we reintegrated back to in person learning.  

Mr. Adegbie was my junior year architecture teacher. Without knowing it he would cure me from my bad habit. He had studied architecture and had worked at a firm. He later moved on to teach architecture in my high school. His class was unique due to the different education from the rest of the academic classes in school. Most days we would spend an hour and a half in architecture class. Our workload would vary but it kept me away from thinking of the assignments that were due that day. His work was something that could only be completed during the class time. Every day I would always focus on what the lesson plan was and how I would implement it to my work, which would vary from drafting to model making. On occasions if I did not manage to complete my work, I had returned to his room afterschool to resume my work. My hands were occupied with a pencil, glue, precision knife or scale but not with a keyboard and screen a foot away from my eyes.

Further in the future, Mr. Adegbie offered me an opportunity I did not take for granted. Mr. Adegebie commented “I see your work. Do you like architecture?” I replied “yea I guess so…” nonchalantly. Truth is I had gone to my high school for the soul reason of their architecture program. He said “Well, I have this internship offering for students who want to work in the architecture field. I would like you to join.” I was shocked, I had believed that internships were only reserved for college students, people with a plethora of experience. He added in a warning voice “But I need you to remain on top of your workload.” As if he already knew I was the biggest procrastinator in school. After a couple days I joined the internship lead by a small local firm aiding both college and high school students. Mr Adegbie’s warning was nonstop ringing in my head, “keep up with your work!” Throughout the internship I would complete most of my assignments during class time, I would rush to make them coherent and make sure they were the right answers. After all the internship was not meant to detain me from my education but to provide me with a greater opportunity. I would see that my schoolwork was completed at school before my moved to my internship work. This new setting had motivated me to maintain my schoolwork in school.

4 thoughts on “Writing Task Saved – Diego”

  1. I had a kindergarten teacher who was very similar to your high school teacher, she was a college student who had an internship with technology, she actually gave my mother the website to sign up for the internship she was in when she saw my interest in technology.

  2. During quarantine, I felt the same exact way. Doing the same thing over and over on a daily basis eventually got to me as well. Quarantine was seen as the downfall of many since they decided school wasn’t for them anymore or just didn’t know what they wanted to do for a career. I admire the fact that you had a passion for architecture and were given the opportunity to get an internship because of it. Being given that opportunity also gives you new skills and helps you be more responsible. I’m glad that you were able to take advantage of that opportunity and apply it to your situation to help better yourself and grow as well.

  3. Honestly I do relate to doing my work last minute. I always have this rush when seeing a due date and just doing it at the very last second. It’s not a very smart thing to do but I always had the job done. I am really glad to see that you have been staying on top of your work and have been able to overcome the urge to procrastinate. You are doing great and everything will pay off.

  4. Good work — good writing — good vocabulary!

    You got many helpful comments from your peers. Use their ideas to help you envision points you wan to make on what skills you learned and on which scenes to develop.

    We talked today after class on finding a focus: How Mr. Adegbie’s Arch class saved me/ How Architecture saved me / How finding architecture as my high school (Name of high school?) major saved me / How my passion for architecture saved me (using Dhanesh’s words! — thx Dhanesh)

    Start making a working outline to get started. What scenes will you include?

    You told me that as a child you liked looking at buildings. Maybe that could be part of your intro. Remember how Amy Tan told about how she is fascinated by language and that’s why she’s a writer.

    Then possibly a scene in Mr. Adegbie’s class — You write:  Every day I would always focus on what the lesson plan was and how I would implement it to my work, which would vary from drafting to model making. On occasions if I did not manage to complete my work, I had returned to his room afterschool to resume my work. My hands were occupied with a pencil, glue, precision knife or scale but not with a keyboard and screen a foot away from my eyes. — can you turn this into a scene? Details of the classroom? the tools in the room? Choose a specific memory of you in Mr. A’s room working on a lesson or a model making project

    Possibly a scene of the internship you did. Details — name of firm? timing spring semester?

    Make a working outline — somethign like:

    Intro

    I. scene

    !! scene

    IX. last scene internship scene

    X ending: what I learned from all this.

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