My Research question is:
How has the Coronavirus pandemic impacted and changed the Mental health of people?
My Message:
I want to point out the importance of considering COVID-19’s potential impact on people’s mental health seriously. Your identity is heavily influenced by your mental health, thus if Covid-19 is the cause of your mental health, it may alter who you are.
My Audience:
I make an effort to connect with folks who have delicate minds, those who experience anxieties, fears, and worry. Similar to developing minds, such as those of teenagers
Genre:
I’ll be writing in the Article genre. I selected this genre because it would allow me to express my own opinions and those of others who share theirs’s.
My Plan:
I would like to research people experience on Articles to see their own view on the situation weather there are similar to mine or different.
My Worries:
I worry that certain articles are outdated and not merely published too early because what if their claims were correct then but not now?
My Title:
The Truth About COVID-19 AFFECTING MENTAL HEALTH In 3 Minutes
Ok, so this proposal does not make a lot of sense. First off, if you want to share your opinion, I believe the genre you are choosing is an Op-Ed. Second off, if this was a writin article, how would you know people would read it in just 3 minutes. You would want your audience to take their time to consume your message. Also, I’m your message, don’t you mean Covid-19 is the cause of developing mental health issues? You only said mental health which can be confusing. I definitely do agree that your mental health plays a role on how people see you and the identity you show to others. Your plan has some grammatical errors, so make sure to reread your writing. Also, I don’t think you should worry about outdated articles, since you can always provide information on how mental health problems shifted over time. I’m honestly interested the publishing of your Article/Op-Ed. Maybe it may have some connection to my topic about dating.
My Message:
I want to point out the importance of considering COVID-19’s potential impact on people’s mental health seriously. Your identity is heavily influenced by your mental health, thus if Covid-19 is the cause of your mental health, it may alter who you are.
WHAT IS AN ARTICLE GENRE? An article can be an op-ed article, a news article, a feature article. You are confused. You need to study the Assignment again.
COMMENT: This is not clearly written. Your message should be what you want people to take away after reading your op-ed.
I would like to research people experience on Articles to see their own view on the situation weather there are similar to mine or different.
COMMENT: This does not make sense. IF you are comparing your view with others, than you are doing a survey, or an interview, or I don’t know what. What you have written is very confusing. YOu need to understand better what genre you are going to work in. STUDY THE ASSIGNEMNT MORE CAREFULLY.
Jemel’s comments are valid. Consider his points.
Thank you Jemel!