Author: Carmen (Page 3 of 8)

My Note 3
I learned from reading this text is the many mistakes we do in our writing that can bother our readers. One example is a paragraph beginning with a quote or closed with a quote this can be said as having no guidance to whoever is reading your writing. The writer doesn’t elaborate what they meant with that specific quote and why they choose it for their topic. Another example is the a lot of quotes in one paragraph or no clear recognition of which one are words of the source and which is our own words. Giving no type of clarity to the reader of a source being use and the analysis of that source. Questions I have is, how to use a text citation from a source?  When should we paraphrased and cite? Another thing is, this for any type of genre we used when we quote or is this specifically for a specific type of genre?

The multiverse is a theory of reality that includes a possibly infinite number of parallel universes. Many scientist has spent years researching a crucial question, is it real or not? Recently this year new disclosures has been reveal. According to the article, Smithsonian Magazine the author Sara Scoles writes,” They are hunting for the stretch marks that inflation would have left on the cosmic microwave background,the light left over from the Big Bang. These imprints could tell scientists whether inflation happened, and help them find out whether it’s still happening far from our view. And if our universe has bumped into others in the past, that fender-bender would also have left imprints in the cosmic microwave background.” Sara Scoles is telling us that scientist had found a way of figuring out the truth of, is the multiverse a fiction or a science? They had found a way stretch marks left in space,but still need to continue investigating; however, they believe finding these marks can be the solution to their problem.  It either can be the answers to all of the questions of the universe they have been asking for ages or simply nothing.  They of course need a tool that can speed up the investigation but right now they have a sense direction of where they can be heading for or what they should be looking out for.

The thing I want to teach my audience and the most important thing I learned is the multiverse has scientist wondering what’s real? and what’s not? However, this theory isn’t really something that scientist or astronomers are going to disregard that easy most  scientist say or see it as something that makes sense when it comes to explaining the wonders of the universe. It will be something that until not proven otherwise will remain as the only explanation. The audience I’m trying to reach are teens who are into science, astronomy anything in the science or math field.

The genre I’m planing to write this is a magazine I choose this because many people who love and are interested to know more about new discoveries on NASA or anything related to science and math they tend to look in magazines or articles. I know a good portion when it comes to this genre how people who write this try to give a bias writing and be informative as they can. I will learn more about this genre by reading the different types of magazines and seeing which one will fit perfectly when trying to reach my audience and do one similar to it.

I plan to write this by first investigation which type of magazine article I will write in. Secondly, how much I will write it for example like a paragraph, a whole page I will have to see how the magazine is usually set when it comes to writing what I want to write, how much information I’m allow to be put in. Thirdly, my title and will I need pictures, quotes etc..

My concerns about finishing this project is, do I have to do it by hand or can it be type by a word templet? Will in reach my audience? The wording does it have to be arduous since it’s for teens but some teens are advance when in comes to the math and science department?