After reading “The Maker’s Eye Revising Your Own Manuscripts by Donald Murray, I definitely agree with how he said that writers need to proofread their writings after they are done and if needed then edit it too. And this is definitely for me because I think that I don’t really proofread my essays after writing them which makes my paper not really interesting for readers.   The main thing I have to work on is not just submitted what I’ve written in my previous drafts, in fact, read them over and over again and fix the paper, and discover new things to say. One more thing that I will pick from Mr. Murray’s essay is that after completing my writing, I should seek help and give my paper to those who are more expert in writing and ask for them to read for me and tell me what I have to do better.