I will revise assignment one because it was not well organized and hard to follow. I think I put everything I want to say at the same time without separating my ideas and distributing them through the paragraphs. One of the comments that I am going to work on is that I have to establish my problem in a focused way, explain it, give an example, and then give solutions. The other comment is that I need to show that the problem is not only mine and give reasons why I am writing this letter. The topic was about teaching methods used in my discourse community and that they are not effective and only focused on grades. I shared only my experience which made it confusing and appeared like it’s only my own problem, not a problem that affects the discourse community I am talking about.