After seeing the prof comments I see that I did some mistakes. This mistake is a problem for me and I need to revise it again because I didn’t specify who’s “we’, and who’s “they” so I have to get this done and fixed. Also, the number of words is over what the prof asked so I have to fix that too.
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Exactly what you need to do! Pronouns can be very confusing if they’re not tied closely to a noun. For example, “The driver talked to his little boy even though he wasn’t a very good driver.” Who does that last ‘he’ refer to? The closest noun is ‘boy’ and I’m pretty sure the kid wasn’t driving! 😀 It’s a very easy mistake but it’s also one that can make a reader very confused.