I received Feedback from my Professor on my summary. According to her, my summary was a good work but the last paragraph seemed like a combination of the author’s thoughts as well as mine. I know the summary was based on the article itself but I completely agree with her because in few lines, this seemed like I included my thoughts instead of the author’s because of some poor word choice like ‘we’. I have fixed those and hopefully it is better now.
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Great! It’s really hard to make sure these summaries clearly sound like they’re from the article and not from us. Nice revision btw.