breakdown your topic into five sections with at 2-3 subtopics per sections 2-4
- introduction
- topic 1
- topic 2
- topic 3 (two topics may be sufficient)
- conclusion
you must provide a citation to a book OR two articles from the library. Do not use content you find on the web unless it is from a city or government agency or exceptional. You need to continue building your bibliography at this stage.
https://www.dropbox.com/s/2amuauwm6fzcf44/The%20Outline%20of%20final%20project.docx?dl=0
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1JIsaFQFd0iCWlP_eaFs14sbShaqPhigs/view?usp=sharing
https://drive.google.com/open?id=1-d7hrRtA6vh2AAURj6mEmXGs4FBf8y73
not seeing any citations to any sources in your outline. I’d also like to see more detail. I think overall, your outline is fine but too minimal.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1TFNm7VxN-yPewsDqSCeKzREk_Yh4D06etX1-oLCb2TY/edit?usp=sharing
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1NyG_Bwg8tsJMPxOv0abiSQc40i2mctxm1inSxVSvVGM/edit?usp=sharing
Great topic but try to be more specific in your outline: which protests, why? Where are your sources showing that you started on your research?
https://drive.google.com/open?id=1RRRUSf3k8899KFrhvlU8h2CajxH8zuI7
updated:
https://drive.google.com/open?id=1RRRUSf3k8899KFrhvlU8h2CajxH8zuI7
Good work, good sources.
https://drive.google.com/open?id=1vL_93WEoP29JAcYPc0CxOM98sYTDS04Q
Fantastic work. We will talk more with Prof. Aptekar about whether or not you should try so much to connect the re-inaugeration of the Bridge with the neighborhood. It’s almost as if you are doing two projects. If you’re finding connections, that’s great but you may have taken on too much to research.
https://drive.google.com/open?id=1l0Jx3I3RU7XHMT9rZYNvo9sSkKWPLOqF
Your outline is perfectly done but not seeing the sources you used for your research.
https://drive.google.com/file/d/14g_YMKz6L06uLw9qus3vQmvnCvafc2MH/view?usp=sharing
Well done, maybe you need a little more detail but you are focused which is great. I’m surprised you found the new book on Roebling. If not, talk to me and I’ll try to get it into your hands.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1k5xns3vzlHiyF6YO1Udrppmpp6I4tzk1cu0tBy-qgUs/edit?usp=sharing
Logical outline but where are you sources? Also, your outline needs a bit more detail at this stage.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/18OibcxzBXJMNchRoYqmY0s_eo0xX_mJ3vOxphzxoUHg/edit?usp=sharing
this is good … you might want to consider that a huge percentage of tourists stay in Manhattan compared to Brooklyn so they would logically cross the Bridge from Manhattan to Brooklyn–try to get some data here. Your point about the skyline is a good one.
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1VxikQ0tJswOpeOkYj1SQjv-kZnU7hwpY/view?usp=sharing
I’d encourage you to find more substantial sources for your research and to go deeper into your topic.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1iZ1bUnY3TZP1FWsIVbDOjnXb3bM1Vb3zfaM6JeVSIx8/edit?usp=drivesdk
not sure how these maps fit in.
https://drive.google.com/open?id=1U7MDqU7Kgi5GtmQfR-BeP78hmfuk36sF
please make your page public
https://drive.google.com/open?id=1cMR-guIV3aECKsUbkZu7eIxSVI1dvBQgAeWr0d3RpQM
good beginning
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1hqZVXkLpTKK7Sm3-CCwn_2W4UQqivUXUNZ1q0CUEIJ0/edit?usp=sharing
good outline but no citations to research …
Viewable
https://docs.google.com/file/d/12UmbgmzmD_Ae-HK6KhxY6hFTpq-zcsI-/edit?usp=docslist_api&filetype=msword
no *direct* evidence you’ve done research in terms of citations to sources you found so far …
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1mAzGg9U_NIj4zcFNfmpjMCtOgp-cVTvD/view?usp=sharing
Some good sources here. Glad to see you’re doing research. Perhaps you want to rephrase “B.How did artist interrupt the arches ?” to “B.How did artists interpret the arches ?” I think perhaps that’s what you mean but not sure.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/11nrQsZ7lLVR0ysODqSoLKAb1MYMXTVLjebGCRlMEDsc/edit?usp=sharing
your outline lacks indications of research and may be unfocused and lacking in specificity in part for that reason.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1tEDx6bmB0kz5VR5TRuYBof04D_NOJ8qgQ90I4z5-oPw/edit?usp=sharing
Would like to see a lot more detail and depth but you’re certainly moving in the right direction
https://www.dropbox.com/s/3qzmy0az36r29nr/full%20outline.docx?dl=0
thank you.