1st- Is the unit 3 group assignment that me and micheal worked on about rape culture. (Link)
2nd – Is the revision for the artist essay which i revised to a personal breakthrough. (Essay)
3rd- Is a gilyard homework assignment (Paragraph)
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1J_so4_BnPGeGxx1W9zKyYc-ZkPOZEIMQ9kJOb8HxU6w/edit?usp=sharing
New York College Of Technology
Haider Mahmood
May 14, 2019
Dr.Carrie Hall
NBA YOUNGBOY
Coming home after one of the worst days in your life. You experienced disloyalty for the first time from someone who you did everything for. Youāre in so much shock that you feel like youāre about to break but you keep your composure. You feel like you canāt trust anyone anymore so you donāt even want to talk to anyone. You do the one thing that is in your comfort zone and that is listening to music. You grab your headphones and turn on the radio, the song playing talks about the exact way you are feeling right now. you look at your phone and see your favorite artist NBA YOUNGBOY and his new song Genie. NBA Youngboyās real name is Kentrell Gaulden but his rap name stands for NEVER BROKE AGAIN YOUNGBOY, he was born in Baton Rouge, Louisiana. The reason why I listen to his songs a lot is because it describes certain pain that most rappers donāt show
Kentrell starts of the song by saying āToo many problems (yeah) Thinking how I’m gone solve it (yeah)ā and just this one line has gotten me already hooked. While listening to this song I was at a very rough point of my life. I had multiple problems where I addicted to a drug, couldnāt really trust any of my friends, lost a lot of money into repairing car that I accidently crashed. Its situations like these you never expect yourself to be in. Everyone is there through the good times when you have the drugs theyāll take it with you and tell you itās not bad and when you get that new car theyāll be happy to get it as long as it benefits them and they will help you spend that money as long as you spend some on them too. No one is ready to help you with your problems and therefore I was stuck in life not knowing what was the solution. Scared to end this toxic relationship with my friends just because I’ve known these guys for my whole life.
Kentrell continues the song by saying āSo much pain in my body (yeah) They selling lies and I bought it (yeah)ā. Which has a general meaning which meant that my friends would saying theyāre my bro and they have my back through any bad point of life but whenever I was there they were never there. One of the most important lines Kentrell says that is āI been giving all my love, tell me do you feel itā. Which describes my point of view of the friendship. I would do anything to make my friends happy. If I see that they wanted something that would make them happy I would get that thing no matter what I had to do. If I see that they need financial help I would reach into my pocket with no hesitation. Situations like these happened every day and all this love I was showing meant nothing and I was never getting any love but I donāt know why I was fine with that. Part of that is because I was blind to see the fact they were using me, I guess I never really believed people like that existed.
Kentrell continues by saying āThey keep begging me to change. Talked to Future the other day and he say I need to change lanes (yeah)ā. I remember when I started to talk to people about what happened they told me I need to change my life. Focus more on making legal money and focusing on school more so I can have a career. I need to put all this anger into changing my life and doing something positive and that exactly what I did. I started asking god for a better life from here on because I believe thatās one of the only people who will always want the best for me. Kentrell continues by saying āSaid I changed on you, but I feel that you changed on me. I say my prayers and you gon’ sow just what you reap (yeah)ā. This is an important line because although I never treated people in a bad way those who treat people in a bad way will get their punishment by karma. Kentrell ends the song by saying āDon’t tell me that you love me, if you ain’t going to die for me (oh). You can stay to fuck from round me.ā Which overall means if you donāt value my life then stay away from me.
In conclusion NBA Youngboy (Kentrell) is a hip hop artist who writes songs explaining his pain. His song really described my emotions from a previous situation. Nba youngboy is one of the only rappers who doesnāt rap for money, he does it for his 5 kids .
HOMEWORK
Gilyard writes in aĀ way that would 10/10 times make me want to continue reading. Hes not afraid to make comments of his real life to impress his own readers. For example when he says āmy main pursuit was money for drugsā . Just saying that shows you a raw side of him that would you wouldnāt really expect a writer to say about himself. Also in Gilyards writing his is very clear when he speaks about a time for example he would say the year and place so people can really picture what he seen. Reading this shows me some tips on how I can really hook my reader and make my essays more interesting.