- Spread the peanut butter on the loafs of bread with your knife
- then add the jelly on top of it.
- Finally put the two loafs together to make a very delicious and scrumptious peanut butter and jelly sandwich.
ENG 3773, Advanced Technical Writing
Information, Communication, and Media
TO: Thomas
FROM: Fabrice Douillard
DATE: September 5, 2012
SUBJECT: Critics on PB&J
Thomas, you did a good job explaining the steps to make a peanut butter and Jelly sandwich. But you could have done it in a better and detailed way. I can truly say you are in a good track so far. A better explanation is expected from you with more details that will give others a better understanding while not missing the steps or getting confused.