Alexandria Dorato essay 2 draft

3 thoughts on “Alexandria Dorato essay 2 draft”

  1. Hi Alexdria, I found your essay very interesting. You social issue was clear. I like the way you give introduction about your essay. I feel like you could add more information into it. You could describe the link between your social issue and song more deeply. I also think you could add some information about your social issue like what you think about it or what does it mean to you. But overall I liked you essay.

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