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Hi Alexdria, I found your essay very interesting. You social issue was clear. I like the way you give introduction about your essay. I feel like you could add more information into it. You could describe the link between your social issue and song more deeply. I also think you could add some information about your social issue like what you think about it or what does it mean to you. But overall I liked you essay.
Yes, I am agree with Jasleen Aujla. Alexdria I think you have put more information in your essay. Also need deeply explain about you topic.
Yes, I am agree with Jasleen Aujla. Alexdria I think you have put more information in your essay. Also need deeply explain about you topic.