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Shan Shan Yu Feedback Project 2

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Shan Shan –

 

Please see suggested revision of your concept sketch.聽 I tried moving a few design elements to give your design better flow and unity.聽 You must redraw that bridge so the perspective works.聽 I gave it 2 sides but you should draw it from reference.聽 Make sure you can see what is in the background behind it.聽 You sketch is missing the details that would be seen through the spaces in the bridge.

See the note on text.聽 Also you can simplify that text. Visit Japan. Cherry Blossom Festival March- April.聽 Find a letterface that works with your art.

YES YOU MUST HAVE A TIGHT PENCIL DRAWING OF THIS.聽 IT MUST BE UPLOADED TO DROPBOX for Printing.

 

YOU CAN DO IT!

 

suggestions-Project 2 – Tricia Browne

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Hello professor wolley,

I did what you advised and took the bird and fan and moved it around in different ways to see what was best. i would like if you gave your opinion on which one i should use.

i wasn’t sure if i should fix the cut out area the bird left or leave that for inking that is why it is there in most of the concepts. that goes for almost all of them i was not really sure if i should complete the fan or just wait for the inking process.

bir on top of fan

This is a close up version of the original idea

birdontopoffan

This is a smaller version i would complete more of the fan in this after it is printed.

layout1 layout2 layout3 layout4

layout5

This is the one i feel i like the best because you can have the poster in two different directions and it would still be right side up

layout 6

i also like this one that has the fan big with the bands logo and the bird separated and on the bottom.