COMD 2313 Illustration 1, SP2017
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Jessica – this has potential but doesn’t’ seem very well thought through. I like the character and I like the values and the silhouettes… all this works. BUT What exactly is the concept? What idea are you trying to get across? Where are the rest of your sketches and thumbnails?
Re read the article. What specifically is being said about pollution? Try using Fusion, Juxtaposion. or Replacement. If that sounds unfamiliar download the lecture on VISUAL METAPHOR.
You draw well but if the concept isn’t great- that’s a waste of your skills.
Cant wait to see what you come up with.