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COMD 2313 Illustration 1, SP2017
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I like all of the sketches, but if I have to choose one I’d say go with the second one since that one best conveys social network as an addiction. Add more details with the boy’s hair, eyes and hand.
Kelvin
Nice work on these editorial sketches! You had SO many good ideas.
All 3 ideas have potential… .
1: Is not very clear and has too much going on.
2 and 3 I like very much.
Both have potential… Is there a way to make either one more visual interesting by playing with the composition? Is there a way to make it clear what the baby is reaching for is not GOOD for it? Value can do this.. so can facial expression… so consider ALL the tool you have to convey your idea.
Don’t be too literal. Focus on Clarity of Concept and strong Metaphor.
Good work!