Find your name on the list of partners below. Before Monday’s class, you must read that person’s rough draft of their essay, and post a comment on their post with your feedback. You should read their essay at least twice, and write at least 300 words of feedback.
Instead of correcting their grammar or punctuation or usage errors, which we’ll all have on rough drafts, try to think with them about the essay they are trying to write, and give suggestions about how to arrive at that clear and effective final draft. Items to consider: Paragraphing (too long/short/off-topic), Organization (think of my outline model), Thesis, P-I-E argumentation, Tone/Register (appropriate/effect?), and any other comments you might have.
Partners:
Sulthan Adam & John Webber
Hossain Ahmed & Tiffany Russo
Dave Bresier & Justin Rivas
Qu’ran Richardson & Jingyu Chen
Alanna Petit-Homme & Jayla Citron
Marry Ousmane & Daniel Cortez
Jared Onofre & Fatma Coundoul
Kymmone Delgado & Jesse Narvaez
WeiFan Gao & Rashawn Lemon
Michael Lazcano & Katya Halavach
Adam Ibrahim & Alkid Lala
