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Unit 1

Working thesis/Rough outline

Introduction

  1. Hook: The world has not met Millennials at their full potential yet
  2. Topic: The right choice of a future degree is the hardest decision a student would ever make.
  3. Thesis: The educational journey is about to find yourself in something what will fulfill and satisfy you as a professional.

Body Paragraph #1

  1. The last word on choosing a future profession should remain with the students.
  2. Very often parent’s best intentions do not fulfill their children’s professional dreams.
  3. My brother’s choice of future profession was not supported by my parents.
  4. Even high professional achievements can leave a person unsatisfied.

Body Paragraph #2

  1. The path to professional development is a path through trials and errors, and sometimes it can take longer than expected.
  2. My educational journey has lasted for 26 years and still has not come to an end.
  3. During the entire period of my education, I have been searching for the feeling of satisfaction and fulfillment in many fields.
  4. It is never too late to find a path to your dream future job.

Body Paragraph #3

  1. The chase after money should never be a priority in a search of a future profession.
  2. The dream profession should deliver the satisfaction, then the money would come along.
  3. For over seven years I have hold a highly paid job, which did not require a higher education. But for all these years I had a feeling that I belong to a different purpose.
  4. The way you feel about yourself as a professional is way more important than the amount of money you make.

Conclusion

  1. The choice of profession should not be based on others’ expectations, it should be considered with the opportunity of self-realization.
  2. The journey to the professional field can be long and unpredicted, but it should strive to achieve the dream.
  3. The result of self-satisfaction and fulfillment will be worth of every complicated moment of educational process.

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