unit 1 – Adam Ibrahim

 

I : Introduction 

 

1. Attention grabber : something to catch the reader’s attention to learn more about  people’s educational years. 
2. Explaining how it impacted me
3. How it impacted me and made me a better learner. 

 

II: Body paragraph 1 

 

1.  Topic sentence: Mention the situation: How it was before and how I felt different because I had trouble writing. 
2. Point: Talking about how the teacher made me a better writer and overtime improving. 
3. Illustration :How that one teacher helped me become a better writer. I was in an after school program improving more. 
4.  Explanation: Reflecting on how I have improved in my writing and materials. 

 

III: Body paragraph 2 

 

1. Topic sentence: write about how important education is important and change your view of thinking and viewing things.  
2. point : how creative writing is involved and important through your educational years.
3. Illustration: talking about how i thought writing was easy but i started to struggle and how i improved. 
4. Explanation: without education i wouldn’t be where i am now in college and learning more. 

IV: conclusion 

 

1. Restate my thesis: my struggles with writing and how I improved. 
2. Summarize my evidence/ point: how that one teacher helped me improve and the after school program.
3. Answer: ‘’so what’’ I overcame my difficulty and improved my writing.