I really enjoyed that she kept expressing her emotions non-stop throughout the whole story, because whenever the main character ever expresses his or her emotion in the story, it allows us, readers, to better understand what’s actually going on in her “point of view” because there are many different point views out there, so for her to keep describing her fear, anger, love at every moment in the story was cool and easy for me to understand her. Although I am very curious as to why you still stayed with him after you discovered he was a werewolf? did you not ever think for a second how harmful he can be towards you and your kid’s future?
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Professor: Jessica Penner
Email: creative.writing.citytech2@gmail.com
Office Hours: Tuesdays and Thursdays, 11:30 AM – 12:30 PM. I’ll be available through Zoom and will send an invitation via email that you should keep all semester. Try to join my meeting at the start of the hour, not at the end—since I may be talking to other students or have another appointment after the hour is up. If those times don’t work with your schedule, we can schedule a different time. This means you’ll have to schedule an appointment in advance. I suggest you have multiple times in mind, since your schedule may not mesh with mine!
I agree with Sumayah on “… so for her to keep describing her fear, anger, love at every moment in the story was cool and easy for me to understand her ” , because we learned more information behind the story through the wife’s POV, and it made the story more convincing.