It is 2077 and technology is greater more than ever. As I went exploring the woods, I came upon a young girl who was trying to create something never seen before. I was watching her trying to build it with her robot hands, which was a wonderful sight that amazed me. She seems to have some relationship with technology. I and her robot dog are watching attentively as she is doing something magical. I wonder how long it will take her to put all the pieces together though, I must go home soon. With all the pieces on the floor I am curious what she will make of this cube in her hands, we can’t wait to see what she does next. She waves at me and I waved back at her still watching for hours now, waiting to see her finish piece.
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Professor: Jessica Penner
Email: creative.writing.citytech@gmail.com
Office Hours: Tuesdays and Thursdays, 11:30 AM – 12:30 PM. I’ll be available through Zoom and will send an invitation via email that you should keep all semester. Try to join my meeting at the start of the hour, not at the end—since I may be talking to other students or have another appointment after the hour is up. If those times don’t work with your schedule, we can schedule a different time. This means you’ll have to schedule an appointment in advance. I suggest you have multiple times in mind, since your schedule may not mesh with mine!
I liked the story very nicely made up but you have to write it in third person POV, not the first person. but you did a good job.