This was certainly an odd and confusing read. It wasn’t until a reread of the chapter that I began to notice the details I had missed. I enjoyed the descriptive nature of the story for this fact entirely. Whether it was because I wasn’t open-mined while reading the passage or it was too early in the morning and taking things at face value I can appreciate the chapter for what it is and can only simply ask, where will the story go from here?
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Professor: Jessica Penner
Email: creative.writing.citytech@gmail.com
Office Hours: Tuesdays and Thursdays, 11:30 AM – 12:30 PM. I’ll be available through Zoom and will send an invitation via email that you should keep all semester. Try to join my meeting at the start of the hour, not at the end—since I may be talking to other students or have another appointment after the hour is up. If those times don’t work with your schedule, we can schedule a different time. This means you’ll have to schedule an appointment in advance. I suggest you have multiple times in mind, since your schedule may not mesh with mine!
I agree, it was difficult to understand and I had to reread some paragraphs to understand what was going on. I do want to know what happens next after this chapter.
I agree that in the story there was a lot going and because there were many characters in the story and very small details were given, that the good point but too much information.