I think that for me personally up to this point I’ve enjoyed this story much more than the others. I loved how delicate and thoroughly throughout every detail was. For example, when she spoke about the oatmeal and brown sugar, I was able to feel that and remember how delicious it used to be for me as a kid as well when I used to have that before school. I loved towards the end when she described the footsteps of her mother, that for me gave me chills because I could hear how her mother leaving was a little scary as a child, but mostly confusing because of the way her mother acted before leaving her. I think something that I might have wanted to know for audience knowledge is the time this took place in. It wasn’t so apparent so I wasn’t sure what era this might have taken place. My question to the author would be, “would you continue the story?”