I think that for me personally up to this point I’ve enjoyed this story much more than the others. I loved how delicate and thoroughly throughout every detail was. For example, when she spoke about the oatmeal and brown sugar, I was able to feel that and remember how delicious it used to be for me as a kid as well when I used to have that before school. I loved towards the end when she described the footsteps of her mother, that for me gave me chills because I could hear how her mother leaving was a little scary as a child, but mostly confusing because of the way her mother acted before leaving her. I think something that I might have wanted to know for audience knowledge is the time this took place in. It wasn’t so apparent so I wasn’t sure what era this might have taken place. My question to the author would be, “would you continue the story?”
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Professor: Jessica Penner
Email: creative.writing.citytech2@gmail.com
Office Hours: Tuesdays and Thursdays, 11:30 AM – 1 PM. I’ll be available through Zoom and will send an invitation via email that you should keep all semester. Try to join my meeting at the start of the hour, not at the end—since I may be talking to other students or have another appointment after the hour is up. If those times don’t work with your schedule, we can schedule a different time. This means you’ll have to schedule an appointment in advance via email. I suggest you have multiple times in mind, since your schedule may not mesh with mine!
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