Nov 28 11:59 PM
Kevin: Dude it’s almost time!!!
Esther: Yes! Can’t wait!
Nov 29 12:04 AM
Kevin: Wtf dude!
Esther: What’s going on?
Kevin: I think it crashed! There’s way too many people trying to get in!
Esther: I keep getting errors
Kevin: Same wtf!
Kevin: Ughhh! They’re going to sell out!
Esther: Maybe check Sunday or Monday times
Kevin: Alright I’ll check other websites and theaters too!
Nov 29 1:44 AM
Esther: Any luck?
Kevin: I’ve been on line for tickets for about an hour.
Kevin: Regal and Atom are still down.
Esther: Same. It’s says I have to wait 36 minutes
Kevin: I got 31. I’ll keep trying Regal
Nov 29 2:15 AM
Kevin: Holy shit! I’m almost through! It’s loading!
Esther: Ok ok! You’re the closest! Get tickets for everyone!
Nov 29 2:17 AM
Kevin: NOOO! It’s another error!
Esther: WTF!
Kevin: UGHHHH! Why the fuck did I wait for then?
Esther: I have a test tomorrow at 10 AM!
Kevin: I have a class and then work!
Esther: Dude I’m really tired.
Kevin: Same. I still have to turn in this work.
Kevin: We gotta get these tickets though. We’ve been waiting for months!
Esther: Ok ok!
Esther: If we don’t get these at 3 AM though, I’m going to bed and trying tomorrow.
Nov 29 3:01 AM
Esther: That’s it
Esther: 3 hours and nothing
Kevin: Damn it
Kevin: You’re right. It’s late and I still gotta turn this in. I’ll finish quickly and go to bed.
Kevin: Hopefully they’ll have tickets for next week.
Kevin: Ugh this fucking sucks.
Esther: Alright well. Have a good night.
Nov 29 3:47 AM
Kevin: I GOT EM!
Kevin: I GOT EM!
Kevin: I GOT EM!
Kevin: I GOT EM!
Kevin: I GOT EM!
Kevin: I GOT EM!
Esther: Wait what?!
Kevin: I GOT EM!
Kevin: Opening day at 6:10 PM!
Esther: OMG FINALLY!
Kevin: I was able to get 5 seats for all of us!
Esther: How did you get through the app?
Kevin: Just before going to bed, I refreshed
Kevin: Just to see if anything popped up and I got them
Esther: Wtf
Esther: Whatever man. What’s important is that WE GOT THEM!
I loved the time stamps! It really shared a sense of urgency! Could you share WHAT they’re trying to get into?
What I enjoyed about Kevin’s dialogue is that the time was included throughout the whole dialogue. I can really imagine that the conversation went like mentioned above because when we are in the process of getting something online the waiting rooms can suck sometimes.
A question I have to improve the dialogue is maybe what movie you were trying to see.
I like how the time stamps were included for this dialogue, it creates its own uniqueness, and I also enjoy how they included some emotion into it.