Prof. Jessica Penner | OL20 | Fall 2021

Devi Ramnarine Dialogue 4

Shivanie: wyd?

Mom: Nothing….. in bed

Shivanie: Everything good?

Mom: Yeah

Shivanie: Ok

Mom: Where them kids

Shivanie: Gone school

Mom: ok sweedie

Shivanie: I got something to tell you

Mom: What

Mom: Everything alright?

Shivanie: Yeah

Shivanie: Just that You’re going to be a grandmother again

Mom: Okay

Mom: That’s good make out your kids and done

Shivanie: 😀 😀

Shivanie: Call you later

Mom: Ok

Mom: Go take rest

3 Comments

  1. Jessica Penner

    This is great! The mom’s reaction is priceless! Could we learn a bit about S? The way S is talking makes me wonder if she’s worried about Mom’s reaction, but I could be wrong.

  2. AKM

    I enjoyed reading this dialogue because it is adorable. giving your mom the news of you becoming a mom has a different feeling attached to it. but are there any fights going on with shivanie and her mom? because usually when someone tells their mom about having a baby it usually brings out happiness and joy but their conversation is really dry.

  3. fnu nida

    I really like to read this conversation between mother and daughter. Her mother’s reaction was good and have a soft heart for her daughter to becoming a mother. But I feel like her mom’s reaction should be more excited.

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