Amrita: Hey mama how are you doing?
Asha: I’m doing well
Amrita: I got great news
Asha: Really??? What is it???
Amrita: He just Propose to me
Asha: OMG!!!!!! CONGRATS!!!
Asha: I’m so happy for you
Amrita: Thank you sis
Asha: next year will be the wedding then?
Amrita: We haven’t decide when next year…….but when we do you’re the first one to get an invitation….. don’t worry 😉
Asha: Ok mama… Love you…. Take care.. Gonna walk over later to see that ring 😀 and few more details 😉
Amrita: Sure come ova ;D
I enjoy how vibrant the dialogue. Can you work on grammar next time?
I love the excitement in this love story.
It would be nice to set a stage as to show where the story took place
I like how positive the dialogue was, it would be nice to know how they met
I love how everyday this conversation feels. as if I was the one in the dialogue, is Amrita your sister?
This conversation was going good. I enjoyed reading this dialogue this is so adorable. I feel like her feeling was different when she was telling to the other person.