Kevon Dawkins

11/24/20

English 1121

Word Counts:187

WRITING: Micro-Activity #20: Revisions

Based on what I have wrote in the past three-unit assignments I would like to improve on the unit one assignment since I improve on my literacy during these three assignments. For you and one assignment, I chose Sakura discourse community that hopefully will be my club /Community that will improve not only physical but mental aspects that will improve people characteristics. The grade I got was satisfactory which is decent but there’s always room for improvement so never settle for less be hungry!!!. The comment from the professor justifies that I need to improve more recommending it as a writer that if not now, when that at the end of the day, I regret my decision of not improving on my self and deli/never reach my goal of success. I would like to address these comments by literate more and come to office over more than ever to seek the opportunity of what I need to improve on, so that in the future I can say wow I’m glad I been taught this concept.