Ana Lis Amezquita 

ENG 1121

November 25, 2020

Word Count: 164

The assignment that I would revise again is unit 1 that is because after I was done with it there were things that I wanted to add and also I got a lower grade on that one than Unit 2. Based on my comments, one of the things that I need to mention was my audience because it was unclear until the end which I totally agree with. Even though at the beginning you might have an ideal, making it clear would have been better. Another thing is that I need to use more sophisticated words. I personally think that I need to work on citing things properly. Besides what I just mentioned, everything was done fine. I hope that when I do it again, I will get a better grade which I will if I listen to what the professor had to say and I work on things that I am lacking.