Chyna Vazquez

November 24, 2020

ENG1121

Word count: 117

The assignment that I plan on revising is my Unit 1 assignment. I chose this assignment because I feel like I left some writing components out. In addition, I think the categories of my letter could’ve been more clear. My speech consisted of 1,111 words so I was very close to the word count of 1,200. Based on my evaluations, my audience was not really clear and my word choice was rated a 17 out of 20. Therefore, when I revise my work I will make sure to have approximately 1,200 words and alter my word choice. I will try to alter my word choice by using a formal tone and a calm mood.