I will revise unit 2 writing assignment. The reason why I chose this assignment is because I got a higher grade on my first writing assignment. After reading the feedback from the professor and my classmate, I know that there are some shortcomings in my essay. They pointed out that in my essay, the structure is not particularly clear, so that readers cannot distinguish what is the main point of the article. They were confused about where I was summarizing and reflecting.  Let readers lose what they are reading when they read. The second suggestion from the feedback, I didn’t make a clear citation in my essay and also mechanics need some work. I am going to spend more time on organizing my Annotated Bibliography, stating my thoughts on it. Reflect my arguments from quotations, so that readers can be more clear about the point of view that my essay wants to express.This is where I need to work on.