The writing assignment that I’m trying to rewrite will be my Unit 1 project. The reason I wanted to revise it was that I got a lower grade in that assignment, which I’m hoping to get a much better grade on. The statement I ought to use to get a slightly get a higher score was the statement you said to be more clear on my audience. Also my writing wasn’t all organized, since I would be skipping around the topics. I will try to make it easier for my listeners to clearly mention who they are. Also I’m going to focus on my tone for my audience because it wasn’t really obvious, and I’m going to try to offer one more explanation why my audience can take care of my problem. Hopefully, when I do this I can earn 15-20 points so that I can get a better score for my Unit 1 Writing Task, Also working on my punctuality.