Jevon Williams

ENG 1121

11/25/2020

The assignment I want to modify is my unit 1 assignment. I chose this assignment to edit because I want to help clarify further my purpose in writing about the topic I chose. Although I got a high grade on the task, I still feel that I can do something to improve it a little more. What other research, beyond the Bible, can you use to discuss the topic of sin? Are there other writings that discuss this? I will address these comments by doing a bit more research and then re-evaluating the information that pertains to the questions. I’ll try my best to rewrite those paragraphs so that each section fleshes out the topic more. As I said earlier, there’s not much work for me to do, considering that I received a 94 on this assignment. Hence, I’ll be switching roles. This means I’ll detach myself from what I’ve written; pretend that I’m reviewing someone else’s work.