I will revise assignment #2. I chose this assignment because I got a negative grade for it and this low grade pushed me to revise it and see how I can get a higher score. Based on two comments from your comments about my assignment #2 for which I got a lower grade, one of them is about the citation where you said: You correctly use MLA format in the citation and quotation section of each source, and if you quote something in your introduction or conclusion that’s from one or more of your sources, you cite it, using the MLA format. The other comment is about the content, in which you said: Your content is readable and informative, and it teaches us about the topic.

I will address your comments by making them a priority during my revision on the assignment #2. I will work a lot so that I can master the MLA citation and make my content more readable and more informative for my audience. Thus, I can get a higher grade.