What unit assignment do you plan to revise? In four or five sentences explain what you will adjust and improve about your work.
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I plan on revising my Unit 1 Final draft which is the speech. I am going to read it over again, check the grammar and write a bit more about the DC I chose for my topic.
unit 1 assignment is the assignment I plan to revise. I feel as if I learned a lot more throughout the semester and can improve my first writing assignment. I feel as if I struggled to make my writing a speech and struggled to catch my audience attention and is something I will like to work on.
I am considering revising my unit 2 project. I lost some point on formatting which I want to fix. There were also so grammatical issues. I am happy with the grade for my other assignments.
I am stuck between unit one or two. Part of me wants to fix unit one to fix some mistakes from it being the first writing assignment. Now that I have more experience in the class I feel like I can do a better job. There is also a part of me that wants to fix unit two. I want to add info in it because I shorten it thinking it was a waste to add the other source I wanted to use since it was not a multimodal source. I personally jut want to put it in there because I think it is worth mentioning, just does not feel as whole without it I think.
I feel pretty good about both of my essays I don’t think I have to revise anything. Might make things worse trying to perfect everything. It’s happened too many times before.
Unit 2 I will revise because I got less mark from unit 1 so I need to focus on what should I need to improve. Also, for the unite three I didn’t submit yet multi modal projects so and i think multi modal will be great. Also, unit two and three we are working same topic so I think more focus one unit two.
I would like to wait to see my grade on our most recent assignment. As of right now, I don’t plan on revising any assignments because I’m happy with my grades. I think I’ll wait for my most recent assignment grade to see if I get a grade I’m happy with or I’ll decide to revise the whole thing. I think the most recent assignment is the one I’ll revise because I didn’t have much time to put into this assignment because holidays and personal things in life so I most likely will take more time on that after the due date.
I think I am with Unit 1 and 2. But I am looking at Unit 3 right now. Hope it will be as well. But if not maybe I will try to revise it again for better grades.
i don’t plan on revising any of major assignments i’ve submitted since i am comfortable with the grades that i’ve gotten on them. and if i were to revise anything i wouldn’t know what more to write/change in my work to make it seem better.
Not sure yet what revisions i will make first trying to finish a few things i need to get done. But i think it would unit 2 since i have had some hard time finalizing that.
As of right now, I would plan to revise my Unit 1 assignment. I would re read it after doing the two other assignments to try to incorporate my knowledge. Maybe correct some grammar too. But overall i’m happy with my grades.
I think I plan on revising up my U3 work since I believe I can do a bit better in terms of my grammar and etc.
I don’t think I want to revise any of my assignments just because I feel like I’ve done it to the best of my abilities and im satisfied with not only the work but the grade I received for it. I did plan on revising the annotated bibliography one before I even submitted it just because I thought I would do poorly on it but I did good on that and I plan to leave it at that. However i’ll still look back on my work and if anything really bothers me then i’ll revise it.