What unit assignment do you plan to revise? In four or five sentences explain what you will adjust and improve about your work.
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I dont know what exactly what i will revise but i will, because based on my past work i reread my work and see if i can add or remove somethings which gives me ease.
I’m not planning to revise any of my assignments. The main reason is that I’m satisfied with my work and my grades. I also have limited time at the moment, working on a few projects, overdue homework, and preparing for final exams.
I plan on revising my unit 2 assignment and I will adjust my research question because I felt like it wasn’t clear enough and need to change few things about that assignment.
I think I will revise the unit 1 assignment because, in assignment 1, I received the lowest grade and I don’t think I have proofread the assignment. also, there is some grammar mistake as well.
I think that I would revise assignment 2 because I feel that I could have gotten deeper into my topic I don’t think I touched the deeper parts of my topic.
I was considering rewriting Unit 1 because I wasn’t satisfied with the results the previous time I looked. I’ve noticed that I have some grammatical errors.
I’m planning to revise the unit 2 assignment. I will improve the lists of the sources in alphabetical order. It also uses MLA citation format.
Unit 2 assignment because I feel like I didn’t spend much time looking for good articles. So I need to spend more time looking for better articles.
I will definitely revise my Unit 1 paper. I struggled with writing in the first person and, looking back, I could do a lot better. The conclusion can also use some more work.
Unit 2 assignment because i think i can do better with the articles
If I were to revise an assignment it would be unit 2. The reason being that I didn’t put in. much effort that I would have liked to. Also I procrastinated a little so it affected me greatly.
I plan to revised on the unit 1 assignment, i scored a horrible 74 on that U1 final draft, however i do not recall the correction or what i did wrong to score a 74. please kindly look into what i can do to get a better score with respect to pointing out correction or changes i need to make.
right now i don’t plan on revising anything because I am very limited to the amount of free time I have. But if I do find myself free I plan to revise unit 2 assignment because I feel like I could have done better.
I don’t think I need to revise anything. I’m satisfied with the grades I’ve received. I’m pretty busy with work too, so I most likely won’t have any time to do so. If I were to revise, however, It would be U1 as it was my earliest piece, and it’s not exactly related to my U2 and U3 work.