Part 4 Rhetorical Analysis
The author is Wendy Berliner. She is an author and a journalist. Berliner often writes books about developing the learning of children and appears objective towards it. Throughout her articleâSchools are killing curiosityâ: why we need to stop telling children to shut up and learnâBerliner uses this article to inform her target audience which is educators and even the general public on how discouraging students curiosity truly affects them. Her purpose for writing this article was to spread awareness towards encouraging kids curiosity. The tone Berliner uses throughout the article is objective. Berliner purely uses information and research to prove how kids act when their curiosity isnât killed and she uses logos by doing this. For example she used the information she got from the University of Michigan CS Mott Childrenâs Hospital and the Center for Human Growth and Development , Dr Prachi Shah and from Susan Engel to show the outcome of students who are being taught to just listen versus ones whoâs curiosity is encouraged. She uses pathos by including an anecdote and ethos by referencing her book. It helps answer my question because it shows why itâs better for childrenâs education when educators encourage it.Â
Part 5 Notable Quotables
âwe should be encouraging questions, because curious children do better.â(Berliner 2)
âChildren, full of questions about things that interest them, are learning not to ask them at school. Against a background of tests and targets, unscripted queries go mainly unanswered and learning opportunities are lost.â (Berliner 2)
âIn one lesson she observed, a ninth grader raised her hand to ask if there were any places in the world where no one made art. The teacher stopped her mid-sentence with, âZoe, no questions now, please; itâs time for learning.â(Berliner 4)
âChildren should be prompted and encouraged to ask questions even though that can be challenging for the teacher,â he says.(Berliner 6)
Hi Nyazia, your rhetorical analysis is very detailed and long. I think you could cut some things up like the first two sentences. You could also improve on the fluidity of your paragraph to make sound less like a checklist. Although the organizer is very useful, I figured we can combine our responses to the questions into a single sentence. In your quotes also make sure to add ellipsis (…) if you’re going to use a specific part of a sentence.