Research Question:
How has the cv pandemic impacted the gym influencer and how they found a solution for it?
Message:
I would like to know the benifit and worst outcome of the people who workouts. such as what people did during the gym got close or if the gym got open. how they work towards that.
Audience:
I am trying to reach the gym inference who were so intimidated by the gym closed and how they got benefits or not.
Genre:
I feel like an op-ed genre would be a good form of writing because I want to share my opinion on this subject and I can share the opinions of others. I feel like if I get the opinions of others will determine how has the cv was impacting the gym influencer.
My Plan:
I would like to research about the gym being closed during those times and how gym influencer was struggling to workout at home. be i had to workout at home during that time.
My Worries:
I am not to worried because most of the gym people were doing good considering myself but i am a little worried about the injury they face during and after the gym was open. and how they were doing mentally.
Think of A Possible Title?:
“Mental and Physical health is important in life”
I appreciate the message you’re trying to create to your audience. I personally did not suffer from any form of social anxiety during the pandemic, so maybe you’re Op-Ed will make me aware incase my loved ones were affected. I hope you do include ways to help the people that are suffering at this point of time. One thing that im wondering about is, have you been affected by the pandemic mentally the same others have?
Thank for commenting Jamel, personally I did actually had been affected a little bit because the amount of time I speak at home made me like I shouldn’t go outside and my mentality was being run over by that. So, I would say yes
Research Question:
How has the cv pandemic impacted and let to social anxiety with friends, family and with people we don’t know?
COMMENT: This must be more clearly worded. Your Question doesn’t make sense. Again the problem is your sentence structure and your lack of language clarity. Tutoring would have helped you.
I feel like an op-ed genre would be a good form of writing because I want to share my opinion on this subject and I can share the opinions of others. I feel like if I get the opinions of other people I can get different types of ways they suffer from social anxiety.
COMMENT: If you aim to share the opinion of others, than this is not an Op_Ed. This sounds more like an interview or a survey. You need to be clear on what Genre you will work in. Study the Assginement again.
I would like to point out that social anxiety has been overcoming in the pandemic. so, I came up with a solution to make sure that people with social anxiety will come back and enjoy the experience of the world.
COMMENT: Again this language is not clear. AND I do not undertstand what your solution is.
I don’t understand your Research Question.
How has the coronavirus pandemic led to social anxiety ……?
prof i just updated the research question and stuff.