Part 1 :MLA citation
Taitz, Jenny. “How to Deal with Quarantine-Induced Social Anxiety.” The New York Times, The New York Times, 12 Nov. 2020, https://www.nytimes.com/2020/11/12/smarter-living/covid-social-anxiety.html.
Main Idea: Dealing with socialization during Quarantine. The way people socialize during corona virus and how they dealt with social anxiety.
Part 2: Summary
In “How to Deal with Quarantine-Induced Social Anxiety” Taitz, Jenny reported that Dealing with socialization during Quarantine. The way people socialize during corona virus and how they dealt with social anxiety. The COVID-19 pandemic led to increased sources of stress for many, along with changes in the ways we connect with others People who are naturally more reserved and those who have experienced trauma like childhood abuse or neglect are more likely to develop the disorder.Oscar Montoya experience he noticed that he wasn’t his usual outgoing self “I had nothing to talk about and social media led me think most people were thriving and i was doing worse.” Most people are same as this and they have difficult times.
| supporting detail: Whether you’ve long struggled with social worries or find yourself feeling unusually awkward around people during the pandemic. | supporting detail: A client recently told me he felt more anxious than he imagined he would while presenting during a zoom meeting. | supporting detail: If you’ve always meant to work on public speaking, Toastmaster, a nonprofit organization dedicated to improving confidence around communication,hosts virtual meetings. |
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Main Idea: Dealing with socialization during Quarantine. The way people socialize during corona virus and how they dealt with social anxiety.
THIS IS NOT A COMPLETELY EXPRESSED MAIN IDEA. YOU NEED TO EXPLAIN SPECIFICS.
In “How to Deal with Quarantine-Induced Social Anxiety” Taitz, Jenny reported that Dealing with socialization during Quarantine [what — this sentence is not a complete idea]. The way people socialize during corona virus and how they dealt with social anxiety [you need to be specific — WHAT way?]. The COVID-19 pandemic led to increased sources of stress for many, along with changes in the ways we connect with others People who are naturally more reserved and those who have experienced trauma like childhood abuse or neglect are more likely to develop the disorder [what disorder?].Oscar Montoya experience he noticed that he wasn’t his usual outgoing self “I had nothing to talk about and social media led me think most people were thriving and i was doing worse.” Most people are same as this and they have difficult times.
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