PART 1: MLA Citation
Smith Esfahani Emily. âTeenagers are struggling, and ltâs not just lockdownâ. The New York Times 4 May 2021. https://www.nytimes.com/2021/05/04/opinion/coronavirus-mental-health-teenagers.html
MAIN IDEA: Teenagers are facing a mental health crisis not just because of the corona virus lockdown but also because the pressure to achieve has also increased over the past years.
| Supporting Detail 1 Dr. Luther has study the ability to change the amount of mental health. Most teenagers are scared of themselves not being happy because their higher level of loneliness and depression. | Supporting Detail 2 School shut down but something unexpected happened, most students were improving. Since class and exams were cancelled students grades were moving from fail to pass. Students noncollegiate activity was ceased. They announce that lower stress and fear collate. Most parent’s play a role in this mental health issues with the teenagers. Teenagers complains that their parents allow them to perform during the pandemic. Dr Luther ask the parent to define success, but they said making their children and loving them. | Supporting Detail 3 Most students Complain that their parent ‘s belief of their show stayed during the pandemic. |
PART 2: SUMMARY
In ” Teenager are struggling with mental health” Emily Esfahan Smith reports that teenager is facing crisis not because of the lockdown but the pressure to achieve which has increases the past years. Dr Luther, professor of psychology at Columbia University has studied strength among of the young teenagers who are poor. Most teenagers are scared of themselves not being happy because their higher level of loneliness and depression. School shut down but something unexpected happened, most students were improving. Since class and exams were cancelled students, grades were moving from fail to pass. Students noncollegiate activity was ceased. They announce that lower stress and fear collate. Most parent’s play a role in this mental health issues with the teenagers. Teenagers complains that their parents allow them to perform during the pandemic to reduce stress . Dr Luther ask the parent to define success, but they said making their children and loving them.
Faustina:
You need to proofread. Some missing words and typos are here and interfere with clear understanding.
The detail about student Carson is NOT a main point; it’s the hook.
Good that you got the point that parents have contributed to their children’s stress. But you have missed some main supporting details: Resilience, Post-pandemic increased performance expectations and increased drive to excell / be successful for students.
Please read again. I suggest working with a tutor on writing the summary.
But so so glad you are doing the work.
Best,
Prof. Wu
Faustina:
Here is the summary that we worked on today in the class:
SUMMARY
In âTeenagers Are Struggling With Mental Health,â Emily Esfahan Smith reports that teenagers are facing a crisis not because of the lockdown but because the pressure to achieve has increased over the past years. Dr Luther, professor of psychology at Columbia University, has studied the ability to change the amount of mental health [DMS â please clarify]. Most teenagers are experiencing higher level of loneliness and depression. Schools shut down during the pandemic, but something unexpected happened. Most studentsâ mental health improved. Since class and exams were cancelled, students grades were moving from fail to pass. They participated in class activity [clarify]. The reveal that the lower stress and fear has balance [huh? DMS]. Most students complain that their parentâs belief of their show stayed during the pandemic [huh? DMS].
Also look the ending part where Smith writes about what parents can do to help lower their children’s level of mental stress.