Poor Irvin looks like he’s got a headache here! Or maybe he’s reading someone’s mind?
While there’s some distracting elements like the exit sign, as you say his shirt and environment direct our attention to his face. Your framing is good, staying mostly above the elbow line, and the light falling in his hair is interesting, particularly with/against the ceiling light behind.
Poor Irvin looks like he’s got a headache here! Or maybe he’s reading someone’s mind?
While there’s some distracting elements like the exit sign, as you say his shirt and environment direct our attention to his face. Your framing is good, staying mostly above the elbow line, and the light falling in his hair is interesting, particularly with/against the ceiling light behind.