Instructions for November 12 class

-Go to the computer lab in the General building or a computer in the Library. Log in and open up your common Slides presentation. By the end of today’s class:

A. Please upload a JPG of your observation notes to Dropbox. I am expecting a minimum of 1 page of notes detailing your observations of the space. You can resubmit on Thursday if for whatever reason your observation notes need extra work.

B. Also, each member of the group should be granted access to the Slides presentation. Each member should have 1 slide in progress by the end of the period. At a minimum, your slide should include:

1) A header;

2) One image, video, diagram (still from video game or film? Screen shot of text? Illustration from early edition of text? Blueprint? Exterior shot of real location? Interior image?)

3) a brief caption indicating its relevance to your part of the presentation + link;

4) 3 bullet points in the Speaker Notes that will eventually become your script, in which you expand on the significance of the image. Quality over quantity: when identifying historical or architectural details, try to be specific. Include your name in the speaker notes.

Eventually, each member should aim for a minimum of 2 slides in the presentation. Also, each group will need to include a properly formatted citation for this source in your works cited page.

You can watch this video for reference as you begin constructing your presentation.

C. One person from each group should send me a link to the in-progress version of the presentation (click on the “Share” icon in the right upper hand corner, NOT “publish to web”).

-Missing slides will result in participation demerits. Extra work beyond the above will earn extra participation credit.

-Write me by email during the period if you have questions!

Thank you for completing your revisions; Gothic Spaces video

Dear class,

Thank you for completing the revision of Essay 1!

As you continue to put together your Gothic Spaces presentations this weekend, I’ve created a video to help you through the process. You can watch it here. Please bring all material you have related to the presentation (including printouts of any relevant sources!) to Tuesday’s class.

Best,

Professor Kwong

 

Announcements: Nov 5

Hi class – below are some notes on upcoming dates.

-Bring Gothic Spaces Observation notes in-class on Thursday. Use the how-to guide to direct your attention. (The full assignment description is available here.)

-Revision due online by Dropbox, 5 pm, Friday. For an extra pair of eyes, Writing Tutoring is recommended (https://www.citytech.cuny.edu/alc/). Break it into stages and focus on the process, not the end result! Video on literary analysis available here.

-Ask me for blog feedback if you want it

Announcement for class tomorrow; video on lit analysis

Hi class,

Just a reminder that tomorrow we will be working on our revisions of Essay 1. Please bring all the work you’ve completed on this revision to date, as well as the relevant texts you’re using. If you haven’t already, you should also begin taking notes on your group’s Gothic space.

Also, as a guide for your writing process, I created a video that recaps last week’s discussion of how to structure literary analysis. Feel free to rewatch as necessary. (There are some particularly useful tips at the very end of the video!)

best,

Professor Kwong

Announcements (October 29)

Dear class,

Thank you for putting in the work of reading today.  I am sorry to those of you who came expecting a conversation; however, it just was not feasible to conduct our usual discussion in light of the reading situation today.

Your priority should be finishing reading “At The Mountains Of Madness.” Use the reading questions to guide your reading. There will be a quiz.

Blog group 3: use your answers to the reading questions as the basis for your posts. Focus on a passage that seems clearest or most easily understood. Critical responses due at 11 am on Thursday.

Please look over my feedback, both on the paper and in your midsemester performance review generally! As I said, I hope you can see this as an opportunity to improve.  If you weren’t present, please make sure you get comments on your paper + your midsemester performance review from me on Thursday.

Please bring your Paper 1, the two texts you wrote about, + any notes to Thursday’s class as well. I will try to budget time for us to begin working on the revision, which will be due on Thursday, November 7.

Critical Response Prompts: “At The Mountains Of Madness,” X-XII

Group 3. Post a Create, Clue, or Connect critical response by 11 am Tuesday. 250 word minimum. Try to do a different type of response than your last post.

CREATE: Draw a visual representation of either a) the scene where Dyer + Danforth are being chased by a Shoggoth, b) the “degenerate” murals depicting the end of the Elder civilization, or c) the final “nameless evil” that lurks beyond the tallest mountains and overshadows the protagonists’ escape.

Include a quote and a brief (2-3 sentence) explanation of the details in your drawing. Upload as a JPG.

CLUE: Pick one of the passages that answers one of the reading questions.  Comment on the literary elements (setting description, point of view shifts, character development, style, etc) present in the passage. How might they provide a clue to understanding any of the following themes?

-Encountering “the sublime,” either in nature or in architectural space

-Political radicalism + colonialism

-Nature as a “gothic space”

-Scientific attempts to understand abjection

-Religious experience without organized religion (e.g. Catholicism)

CONNECT. 

Pick one of the passages that answers one of the reading questions.  Comment on the literary elements (setting description, point of view shifts, character development, style, etc) present in the passage. Connect it to one of the texts we have read so far, either noting parallels or contrasts between its Gothic elements and those of the text you’ve chosen.

Announcements for weekend of October 25

Good to see you and reflect on ruined cities, as well as why people read horror, yesterday.
For the weekend:
Each group should have 1 representative write me to confirm their group’s choice of video game, real-world NYC space, or film, by 5 pm today. You may have let me know already, but please confirm so that I have a record – thank you!
Comments on this week’s critical response is due by 5 pm today. Since there’s only one post, only 1 comment is due this week. Try to engage with previous posters’ comments.

Read and annotate “At The Mountains Of Madness,” sections VI-IX. This time please annotate once per section in the Google doc. Use the handout on analysis tips to guide your analysis if you feel stuck; you can use the audiobook as well.

Blog group II, please complete a critical response on this section based on the prompts. Pick one of the prompts and respond by 11 am on Tuesday.
I’ll have comments and provisional grades on Paper #1 back to you on Tuesday. As I said, you will have the chance to revise for a higher grade. See you Tuesday!
Professor Kwong

At The Mountains Of Madness, VI-IX

Group 2: Post a Create, Clue, or Connect critical response by 11 am Tuesday.

The post should focus on the contents of 1 particular paragraph.

The Create post should involve either a visual representation (in the form of an uploaded JPG) or a creative writing elaboration (fiction or poetry).

The Clue and Connect posts should both go beyond summary and analyze how specific literary elements (e.g. plot development, setting details, character choices) might articulate broader themes. Some of these may include:

-Abjection

-The sublime

-The uncovering of secret revelations that destabilize identity

-The subversion/challenging of race, class, or gender norms

-The symbolic significance of “ruins” or abandoned architectural spaces.

Clue posts should speculate how the passage might provide a clue as to Lovecraft’s philosophy or outlook on history + science.

Connect posts should try to compare/contrast the paragraph with another text we’ve read this semester.

Announcements for Tuesday, October 22

Hi class,

Good to see you today – I look forward to reading your papers.

Some notes:

-Please finish Part II as well as Parts III-V of “At The Mountains of Madness” for Thursday’s class. These are shorter parts, and if you wish, you can listen along to the audiobook here (scroll down to the video info to click on a specific section). Please print and bring to class!

No formal annotations this time, to leave room to think about Gothic Spaces presentations (see below).

 

-Blog group 1 (Sierra, Brian, Kerri, Jeremy, Janiya), please review the critical response prompts, and select 1 to respond to. As usual, try to ensure that you cover all the prompts amongst yourselves. Post by beginning of class on Monday.

-Below are your Gothic Spaces Presentation groups, followed by suggestions for virtual, cinematic, or real spaces your group could focus on. You will have some time to discuss with your groups on Thursday, but you should spend some time (~15-20 mins) investigating some of these titles and deciding which might appeal. Alternatively, if you have another idea, you should come prepared to discuss your preferred choice.

Video Game group: Kerri, Brian, Jeremy, Freddie

Suggested video games: Silent Hill, Resident Evil, Anchorhead, Amnesia, Call of Cthulhu: Dark Corners Of The Earth

Movie/TV group: Katie, Fahima, Afeisha, Christina
Suggested films: The ExorcistLast House On The Left, The Amityville Horror, Poltergeist, The Haunting (1963)
Suggested TV shows: Stranger ThingsThe Haunting of Hill House, The Others
 
Real Life Haunted/Gothic Space group:
Fareena, Janiya, Angel, Ayshe, Sierra
Suggested spaces: New York’s haunted spaces (NOTE: some of these may not be practical or possible to investigate, but it’s worth browsing)
Dover Castle (supposedly one of the most “haunted” places in England)
Your group should settle on a place that you can either physically go to, or that you can “explore” via video and/or virtual recreations.

Critical Response Prompts: At The Mountains of Madness, III-V

Each of the prompts should be answered by at least 1 member of blog group 2. Please confer amongst yourselves as to who will write which prompt.  (Each member should try to do a different category than the one(s) they’ve already done!) Responses should be at least 250 words and posted by 11 am the day of class. Please remember to select the appropriate Blog category before posting.

CLUE. Pick one detail related to any of the following:

-plot (a major event that amps up conflict, or revelation that provides key backstory)

-point of view (a moment where the narrator shows his limits, or moves between describing what he knew “then” and what he knows “now”)

-setting (descriptions of atmosphere or geography)

Write about how that detail might provide a clue as to the story’s perspective on any of the themes we’ve discussed in class: tampering with nature, American conquest of the unknown, and/or the inability of scientific language to adequately “explain” what the narrator encounters.

 

CONNECT. Pick a passage and connect it to any of the texts we’ve discussed in this class so far. It could be a point of contrast or a parallel. Make sure you expand on the comparison, beyond simply saying “it’s the same” or “it differs.”

CREATE. Draw a visual representation of any of the scenes in this section. It doesn’t have to be intensely detailed, but it should be a bit more involved than the visual annotations we did last class. Upload it as a JPG, and in 3-4 sentences, explain what the picture represents. Include direct quotes that refer to the text of the story.