Writing for the Public

Author: Bryan Moreno (Page 2 of 8)

Classwork

My topic was about how covid change my life this topic is important because it brought peace to my life and made my belief change. In my opinion this is revenant to me today because there’s things I had before covid but that I can live without now, or i’m tryin to say I left bad things behind. This most affected me in the way that people that weren’t good for me or people that were just a distraction left my life now I know those people that are with me after covid there are always going to be with me.

Revision Plan

for my Unit one I will read the professor comments and go throw my essay many times a and make other people read it to get more feedback.

  • Fix the order of my sentence and try to make sense out of it
  • Having many ideas in my paragraph and try to just talk about one idea and be more specific
  • More use of college vocabulary to make my paper seem more important and reliable to other college student.
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