In order to revise there are 3 things which i will be doing/fixing in my unit 1.

  • I will try and fix my grammar which includes punctuation.
  • I will be looking at it with a new pair of eyes since it’s old. I don’t remember so it will be easier for me to see the mistakes.
  • I will be potentially changing the order of the paragraph in order for it to make more sense but it is only a probability.