Prof. Garcia | ENG 1121 - OL78 | Fall 2020

“Micro-Activity #20: Revisions”

The assignment I am deciding to rewrite is the speech about discourse communities .The reason i am rewriting it is because i did not grasp the idea of the assignment. i started out with writing background information and then going into the speech. Also there were a lot of careless spelling mistakes that i made. My ideas also seemed to be structured in a very unorganized way. The way i will fix these problems is simple. I have organized my speech in a very specific way so it flows better. My misspelled words are just a very careless mistake that I will fix . Finally I have a speech that is correctly organized with the information from my intro and accurately addressed to who it needs to be .

1 Comment

  1. Ruth Garcia

    Evan–I know we discussed this but definitely reach out if you have question as you go along.

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