Prof. Garcia | ENG1101-HD80 | Fall 2022

Unit 1 Draft

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1 Comment

  1. Ruth Garcia

    The document settings need to be changed so that anyone with the link can edit. But since I can’t comment, I’ll put my feedback here:

    Right now this does not tell the story of a moment where you realized that people or the world are awful. This focus is a good one to follow, but you need a specific realization about people or the world. In other ways, what is one way in which people are awful? And what specific experience lead to you having this realization? This is the story you can tell.

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