Check your Final Grades!

Hi everyone,

I have your final grades on blackboard but they have not been officially posted yet!

Some of you are still missing work and I am going to list your names here because I am having no luck reaching you via email so I am hoping to reach some of you through the announcement board:

Missing Unit 3 New Genre:

Steven Cruz

Deshui Yao

Missing Portfolio & Reflection:

Steven Cruz

Tania Garcia

Cesar Gutierrez

Jayden Ortega

Daymondray Taylor

Deshui Yao

If you have posted anything to Openlab, I have not seen it. We ditched Openlab for submitting the last two final drafts since it has become to overfilled with work and has become nigh impossible to navigate the site. Final work for these missing assignments MUST be posted to blackboard or emailed to me directly. 

You have until the 23rd to submit these missing assignments, please get them into me ASAP.

For everyone else who has completed their work, you may now view what your final grade is going to look like before I post it to CUNYfirst by heading to blackboard and clicking on “My Grades” which is now right below the Help link on the blackboard menu for our class. 

I wish all of you a relaxing and safe winter break and holiday season!

Best wishes,

Professor LaTourette

No Zoom Thursday 12/2

Hi everyone,

I’m postponing our zoom meet until we meet next Tuesday 12/7. Instead, please post to the final portfolio discussion a one paragraph excerpt of a paper you have written this past semester that you would like to revise, including why and how you would revise it in no more than 100 words.

Consider this small assignment as an impromptu first draft of the final portfolio that is due on 12/14.

This post is due before midnight tomorrow night as if we completed it in class together.

Until we meet again next Tuesday 12/7, enjoy your weekends and please make sure you are keeping up with your work. We are almost finished with the semester and I can no longer give extensions.

Weekly Announcement Tuesday 11/23

Hi everyone,

Just a reminder that we are not meeting this week via zoom. However, you should be making your final touches on your Unit 3 New Genre Assignment that is due when we return on Tuesday 11/30. The final draft of this assignment should be submitted via blackboard AND via OpenLab as a new post in the Unit 3 New Genre discussion page where we can showcase everyone’s work.

You must submit to both in order to get full credit!

Next week, will begin working on our small final assignment and present and discuss your Unit 3 work.

Hang in there, we are just about done with the semester in a few short weeks!

Unit 3 Final Draft Due 11/30

The New Genre assignment will be due via Blackboard on Tuesday 11/30.

On that same day, we will begin our portfolio discussion.

On a separate note: we will *not* meet for class this Thursday 11/18.

Rewind, Re-Envision, & Reflect

There are countless genres from which you might select for your final project. Below is a partial list, but feel free to think outside the box!

Potential genres: Journal entry, comic strip, personal letter, movie review, biographical excerpt, encyclopedia article, how-to guide, scene from a movie or play, fairy tale, talk show interview, picture book, local news report, obituary, tabloid article, recipe, newspaper article…

You will want to think specifically and purposefully about the genre you select for your re-envisioning. Think about what makes sense given the content of your original ENG 1101 assignment.

Below, write 2-3 potential genres you might consider for your re-envisioned text.

1.___________________ 2. ___________________ 3. ___________________

For each of the genres you wrote above, think about what you see as connections between the genre and the content of your original ENG 1101 text. Write your thoughts as comments and then we will discuss them together.

Zoom Meetings canceled for this week (10/26, 10/28)

Hi everyone,

Just reaching out to you to let you know that I am suspending our zoom classes for this week only. I would like you to focus your efforts on completing the RAB final draft and uploading it to blackboard.

When we return next Tuesday 11/2, we will hold a small workshop of our RAB final drafts so we can assign our fellow classmates grades and begin looking forward to the final project for this class.

Looking forward to seeing you all next Tuesday. Enjoy your Halloween weekends!

Short RAB Reflection

What are some discoveries you have made so far while researching? Did your hypothesis remain the same or did the research reveal some opposing ideas? Finally, did you find yourself disagreeing with a source? Why or why not?

Navigating Genres

After reading Kerry Dirk’s “Navigating Genres” answer one or both of the following questions. Remember that one of the paramount points of rhetoric is to persuade the reader. It is not the information shared but *how* the information is shared to the writer’s audience. Using what we learned from writing quotes, use at least one “quote sandwich” in your response.

1. What are some genres that you feel you know well? How did you learn them? What are their common rhetorical features?
2. How much freedom do you enjoy when writing? Does it help to have a form to follow, or do you find it to be limiting?

RAB Intro

Please post your Reflective Annotated Bibliography Intro as a comment on this post. If you have any questions regarding how to write the introduction, please consult the RAB map.

In addition, begin thinking about what you would like your first source to be; maybe there is a YouTube video, podcast, or an article you have read recently (that did not come from this class) which you would like to consider using.

Weekly Announcement 9/27

Hey everyone,

Remember that your educational narrative final drafts are due in the Portfolio and Reflection tab before our class tomorrow Tuesday 9/28. I hope to accomplish going over them with you and doing a little bit of a grading workshop in class together.

Please ignore the assigned reading on the schedule for tomorrow. I’m going to be making some changes to how this openlab course will be run because it seems that we are running into frequent obstacles that are out of our control. I will talk with you more about this in class tomorrow!

Best wishes,

Professor LaTourette

Hi everyone,

Thank you to those that came for a small workshop to go over your first drafts! I hope you found it helpful.

As for where to submit your final drafts: from now on, all final drafts will be submitted under “Portfolio & Reflection.” I tried getting a new menu to work on this website but I am feeling a bit defeated, so this is where we are making our final draft submissions from now on until I find a better alternative.

Please make sure to submit your drafts before we meet for class this upcoming Tuesday 9/28.

If you have any questions, please email me!

Best wishes,
Professor LaTourette

Weekly Announcement Thursday 9/16

Hi everyone,

Remember that we do not meet this evening for a zoom lecture so please use this time to complete your 250 word blog posts. It is important that this is completed before you move on to your Shitty First Draft (SFD) for our next class this upcoming Tuesday!

For Tuesday, please read Anne Lamott’s “Shitty First Drafts” excerpt and write your own SFD for the educational narrative paper. The prompt can be found under MAJOR ASSIGNMENTS. Although we did go over a bit how to organize our thoughts into neat paragraphs, the SFD does not need to be organized thoroughly. We will work on this together before your final draft is due!

Good luck to you all and I look forward to reading about what you have to say!

Best wishes,

Professor LaTourette

Weekly Announcement Tuesday 9/7

Hi everyone!

I hope you all had a very relaxing and enjoyable weekend. We do not meet for classes this evening so at least for my class, you still have a little time off from lectures.

With that said, please remember to submit your posts about your education narrative based on the Amy Tan and Jose Olivarez readings under “Unit 1 Discussion” for credit by this evening. I noticed only two of you have made posts and you will need to comment on at least two others’ posts before our class on Thursday.

For class Thursday, I will have some of you share with the class what you wrote and we will discuss a bit what the education narrative means to us. This is a wide ranging subject matter so all perspectives are welcome!

Best wishes,

Professor Douglas LaTourette

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Hi! And welcome to our first day of class!

 

Day One HW: 

Being an online student can be intimidating, confusing, and just plain difficult!

So for these first few days, you get to vent about it! No kidding. Share your concerns with each other. Maybe give each other some advice or just a good old bit of support. Believe me — online instructors have many of the same worries you do, even if we’ve been teaching online for a while. I also promise not to hijack the conversations, either! 🙂

Here’s what you’ll do:

PLAY with the website. You can’t break it. Honestly. I’ve tried. Click around on all the tabs. See what’s there! This is our classroom for the semester, so make yourself familiar with the room. 

READ: these three short “Tips” pieces

WRITE: a new post (note to instructor: depending on the website you use, you’ll need to add instructions for how to do this. Blackboard and OpenLab both provide instructional links) 

  • Start with one word that describes how you’re feeling about this course as we get started. No need to explain, but you can if you want to. 
  • Talk about your worries, concerns, reactions to the readings and/or to being an online student… whatever you want to. No censoring… except keep it kind of clean, please ;-). And
  • Add a picture that means something to you, and explain why you chose it — why does it mean something to you?

Check back in and see what other people are saying, and reply  to a couple of people. It’s nice to know we’re not alone!


Day Two HW:

READ: “How to Read Like a Writer” by Mike Bunn. 

In this article, Bunn says that his students suggests that the advice they would give to future students is that they  “write yourself notes and summaries both during and after reading.” So I’d like you to do that. Please take out a piece of paper and a pen (or pencil) and have it beside you as you read.  

Using our course Perusall site (or the PDF commenting function on Google Docs) make at least 5 annotations– comments in the margins. These can be observations or questions, or simply summaries of the paragraphs. This annotation exercise is all about noticing what you notice!  

WRITE:  On the website, write a post of at least 300 words discussing the following questions. You can also post the picture of your notes from the reading in this same post: 

  • In his article, Mike Bunn writes “You are already an author.” He’s talking to you.  What do you think he means by this? What are some of the things you write already?  (Hint: “Nothing” is not an acceptable answer.) Think of all of the ways you already use words in your everyday life.  That’s authorship! How will that existing expertise help you in your college reading and writing career?
  • Was there anything you noticed in Bunn’s article that you would like to try to do in your own writing? What, in particular? Please be specific!

TAKE SURVEY: Please take the online technology survey!  This will help me know what kind of access everyone in the course has to technology so I can plan accordingly.  Thanks! 

SIGN UP: In this course, you will need to sign up for the program Perusall. To do so, create an account here: https://app.perusall.com/ and use [perusall will give professors an access code to enter] as your access code. For help getting started with Perusall see the “Getting Started” page HERE.

 

 

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Standardized testing should not be a one size fits all method. There are many different factors that need to be taken into consideration in the academic evaluation for each individual student such as, life circumstances and mental health. Standardized testing fails to consider these factors therefore it offers no meaningful measure of progress in addressing the students educational needs and evaluation of knowledge. Things that needed some improvement were my analysis. I feel like my first paragraph lacked detail when explaining my source. I also feel like i could have reviewed my work more before turning it in because I noticed a lot of grammar errors.  

Ever wondered how standardized testing affects a student’s ability to progress in school? Well for over 200 years, standardized testing has been used in public schools throughout the country and has been a method in which schools accept or reject students from their schools. The tests have had a lot of debate around it and teachers have questioned whether these tests are benefiting or hurting their students due to their negative impacts. Standardized testing is not a useful method for students and for schools. 

One reason why students are not excelling in school and tests is because of their own life circumstances and mental health problems. The Anxiety and Depression Association of America states that “feelings of disappointment, anger, helplessness and fear are typical reactions to test anxiety”.These tests put so much pressure on students, making it difficult to perform at their best. What’s not being taken into consideration is anxiety which can worsen students’ performances. The Washington Post “It looks like the beginning of the end of America’s obsession with student standardized tests” explains how research has proven that these tests are not beneficial and are only making it worse for students with life circumstances. Valerie Straus demonstrates, “They had long pointed to extensive research showing standardized test scores are most strongly correlated to a student’s life circumstances. Real reform, they said, means addressing students’ social and emotional needs and the conditions in which they live, and making improvements in school buildings.” This proves that schools should take the students’ mental health more seriously and make healthier improvements at school so the students feel more comfortable. It’s important for schools to do this because it will not only make the students more excited to learn but it will also improve students’ test performance. Moreover, Colleges relied on SAT and ACT scores to better their school’s reputation. The Washington Post “It looks like the beginning of the end of America’s obsession with student standardized tests’ ‘ that they would accept students with high SAT and ACT scores to better their school and ability to push students. Valerie Straus demonstrates, “Scores on the SAT or ACT became an important factor in deciding who was accepted. College rankings — led by the annual lists of U.S. News & World Report, which were heavily weighted on test scores — became powerful as students relied on them and schools tried to improve their rankings with targeted reforms.” This proves that colleges were more focused on their school’s reputation rather than their student’s mental health and ability to do good in their school. Instead of looking at the student’s strengths, they use their test scores for their own benefit. Lastly, students in all grade levels struggle with tests because of their own circumstances, while teachers and lawmakers need to make it more comfortable and convenient for them knowing that they have their own struggles.

Standardized testing is not flexible and is super time-consuming for students. The article, “Examining the Pros and Cons of Standardized Testing” explains how the tests can show work that the students are not too clear about which can make them anxious moving forward. Derrick Meador demonstrates, “Some students may excel in the classroom yet not perform well on a standardized test because they’re unfamiliar with the format or develop test anxiety. Family strife, mental and physical health issues, and language barriers can all affect a student’s test score. But standardized tests don’t allow personal factors to be taken into consideration.” This proves that being given standardized tests can ruin a child’s mental health. No parent wants to hear their child come home and tell them school was boring because they had another test, they should not be educated in this manner because sooner or later this will develop test anxiety within their child. Therefore being given a standardized test will not work out because they fail to understand that kids are at various stages in their emotional and maturity development. Kids want to feel accepted and not feel as if a test depicts their future. Moreover, “Examining the Pros and Cons of Standardized Testing” explains that, teachers tend to teach what’s going to be on the tests instead of teaching the students new material that will benefit and bring out their creative side. Derrick Meador demonstrates, “Standardized testing causes many teachers to teach to the tests, meaning they only spend instructional time on material that will appear on the test. Opponents say this practice lacks creativity and can hinder a student’s overall learning potential.” This proves that 

Teachers who spend time on just the material of the test fail to educate kids on the focus of quality education. Test scores do not let parents see what their kids are actually learning in school. It is very limited because most teachers are told to teach a curriculum based on standardized tests and not prepare their students for the real world. 

In the book The Test: Why Our Schools are Obsessed with Standardized Testing –But You Don’t Have to Be, Anya Kamenetz explains how standardized testing can affect schools financially. Anya Kamenetz demonstrates, “The feedback loop is closed when rising real estate values result in higher property taxes, meaning even more money flows to the schools that post the best scores. In the book, Warren advocates a universal public voucher system to neutralize the unequal effects of local property taxes on school funding, a position.” This proves that Warren wants money to not only be funded to schools with high test scores but to all schools regardless of their scores. Funding money to a school that needs it can help hundreds of students and teachers excel. Moreover, in the book The Test: Why Our Schools are Obsessed with Standardized Testing –But You Don’t Have to Be, Anya Kamenetz explains how the schools with low test scores get closed down so the states don’t lose money. Anya Kamentez demonstrates, “Schools that fail to meet test score targets are sanctioned, lose their leadership, or close; districts and states must give the tests and follow the rules or else lose billions of dollars in federal education aid.” This proves that standardized tests are not made for the student’s benefit of learning but to test the school’s teaching abilities. As said in the previous quote districts will shut down if they do not match up to their expectations as administrators. 

As expressed, these days standardized testing isn’t used to benefit kids but only ruins their mental health and lack of learning. If test scores are high it’s viewed as the staff in the school is doing a good job teaching, but if it’s low it’s viewed as doing a bad job. These tests clearly are made to benefit schools rather than educate kids. Students should be given the comfort and material that will bring out their creativity which will make them enjoy school and feel comfortable around their teachers and peers. Children should not be put under so much stress just for schools to use their test grades as a way to prove that they are a good school!

 

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In retrospect some of my regrets would be letting the other students get to me with the bullying and negative comments regarding IEP. Today, I realized that the bullying and negativity was coming from a place of ignorance to the benefits of the IEP program. Everyone has limitations in some areas of learning. IEP helped strengthen a lot of my weaknesses and helped me overcome obstacles that prohibited me from getting the grades I needed to get ahead in my education. Another regret I have would be leaving the program before I could improve my testing skills. Had I stayed on the program a little longer I would have not struggled with my regents and AP tests in high school. I do understand that this is an area that I still need some improvement on however, I’m working on it by studying hard before my exams.

Throughout all of elementary, middle, and high school I struggled to overcome language and learning difficulties. These challenges left me insecure. I felt I was not smart enough for my grade level. I believe my anxiety was one of  the main reasons I did so poorly. I was never able to focus or participate in class because of it. Although I had plenty of teachers to guide and help me in English, I was not improving in my studies. My mother decided to put me in an IEP class thinking it will be easier for me to see a teacher on a one on one basis. An IEP class (Individualized Education Program)is a program developed to ensure that a child with an identified disability receives specialized instruction and related services.

In my experience, an IEP class has its pros and cons but the class is overall very beneficial for students that are struggling in any subject.  I began to see two different teachers around 3rd grade, my main teacher and the teacher that would take me out of class for my daily services. I was expecting to be removed from class which made me extremely annoyed. That meant I was not going to be working on lessons with my friends and sitting with them in class. Each class had a set of students that would need services, so we all gathered together in the 6th period to meet with our IEP teacher. I never made friends with kids from the other classes so I did not know how to approach anyone. Before class started, each morning I would be sent to my IEP teacher and be put on this computer program that would help me with my reading. It was extremely repetitive! My IEP teacher would also give us homework on top of the homework our main teacher gave us which was stressful on me and the others. Although I was having a hard time enjoying the class, I did learn a lot of important things from my teacher that still benefits me today. My experience with IEP in elementary school was difficult but it didn’t matter to me in the end because my teachers and my mom were seeing progress. Leading up to middle school, I chose to stay in IEP because I was getting the help I needed from my teacher and wanted to continue receiving the same services.   

Going into middle school with an IEP wasn’t easy because the teachers did not know where to place me. Each class was based on the students’ level of learning. I was removed from a class and put into another class because of my learning disability. It made me feel like it wasnt good enough. I started to realize that the students would make fun of me or the other students that also had IEP. Bullying can become a problem when in an IEP. Some thought being in an IEP was for dumb students who were delayed, but they did not know that it helped plenty of students like me with my anxiety and schooling. Middle school really opened my eyes and made me realize that an IEP was only to benefit me and made me appreciate my teachers and peers even more. Not only was I gaining so much from it, I also built a deeper relationship with my teachers. My IEP teacher towards my 8th grade left a long lasting impression on me. She was not only my teacher but a really good role model. I enjoyed seeing her because she would give me advice on life which helped me through life struggles. I was sad that I was graduating because I knew I would miss my teacher, but she still kept in contact with me throughout high school. 

In high school I began to notice that I no longer needed an IEP towards my last few years. My overall performance in school was better than normal. My teachers began to suggest that I be removed from IEP so my mom did what she thought was best and removed me. Being without an IEP  started to become a problem for me when I began to take my regents or any AP exam. I was always so used to having extra time on my exams to the point I started to depend on it. I’m a slow test taker and I needed way more time to finish my tests then the other students. During my SAT I had only limited time to take my test which led to me not finishing it on time and getting a very poor score. I was extremely devastated with this outcome because I knew that the SAT was extremely important for college. Luckily for me, due to covid colleges were making SAT scores optional. My AP exams also became a problem because I would never finish them on time and questions would be left blank due to my slow pace. Losing that extra time did not prepare me for major exams in highschool which led me to feel extremely regretful. 

 My problem with IEP was that I was relying on it too much towards the end. Having that extra time on tests was good but it never prepared me for when I wont have extra time on tests, for example in college. Another major problem I faced throughout middle, and highschool was the stereotypes students were putting out about IEP. It wasnt easy hearing other students make fun of me and others in the IEP class, saying that we were dumb and not fit for school. Made me second guess myself and my ability to learn which prevented me from actually trying and gave me even worse anxiety. Even my friends would question me about the class and ask me why I was in it. They knew why, but just wanted me to feel bad about myself. Overall my relationship with the educational system has taught me to embrace certain academic problems and learn from them. Learning from it has helped me be more prepared for advanced classes in the future.