Monthly Archives: October 2014

John Medina’s Brain Rules, Vision

During the first ten minutes of class, write a summary of your reading of the Vision chapter from John Medina’s Brain Rules. Also, write about how important vision is to communication–from the side of the communicator as well as the audience. Before our next class, post a comment here based on your in-class notebook writing.

Introduction

In this project, I had the time to think about how my thoughts would effect me in my future success. I noticed that most of my thoughts were either about fitness, homework, food, sleep, and work. After I finished this project, I learned more about myself and how the things I do will eventually affect my future.

Thinking in Writing

7:00am – Ugh I’m so tired, I don’t want to go to lab.

7:30am – I’m so hungry…YES ! I got lucky charms

8:00am – OMG I’M GOING TO BE LATE FOR CLASS !

8:30am – Yay made it just in time for class.

11:00am – Finally done for the day.

11:30am – How much homework do I have? Let me check on Blackboard.

12:00pm – No more homework. Time for gym !

2:30pm – Yuck I’m so sweaty it’s so nasty. Ugh I need to shower ASAP.

3:30pm- Time to nap before work.

5:30pm – Ohno ! I have to get ready for work

6:00pm – Work time SO excited…not

12:30am – OMG finally done with work, I’m so tired.

Thinking Visually

pudding

These are puddings inside cute jars from my workplace Pomme Les. They’re very yummy !

shoes

These are Brand New Nike Freeruns 4.0 that I got for the gym.

blink

This is the location of my gym membership, Blink Noho.

homework

These are all the notes, homework, and class notes that I had to use to study for my Biology Exam #1.

Thinking Rhetorically and Reflectively

Have you ever stopped and wondered about how your thoughts in one day can affect your future personal, academic, and professional life? Well, they can. My name is Mei Na Chen and for the past few days, I have been working on a project called, “Project 1: Writing the Brain.” The main purpose for this project is to find a unity of thought or one approach and write about it. However, there are multiple steps you have to take in order to complete this project. The first step is to keep track of your thoughts for one day; when you wake up to when you go to sleep. You have to jot down your thoughts for every half an hour. The second step is to take pictures of things that represent your day of thought and then decide which three are your most meaningful ones. And finally, the last step is to combine everything you have done and write an essay explaining how your day of thoughts and pictures represent you. And yes, I am on the last step, writing my essay. In my essay, I am going to explain how pictures of school work, Blink Fitness, and Pomme Les will affect my future personal, academic, and professional life. I argue that my current thoughts are focused on important things that will eventually lead to my future success in my personal, academic, and professional life.

I argue that my current thoughts are focused on important things like school work, which will eventually lead to my future success in my academic life. Throughout the years of education that I’ve had; starting from Pre-Kindergarten to High School I’ve learned a lot about doing work in school and out of school. I’ve learned that if you don’t do work or study, you wouldn’t be able to learn anything compared to the other kids who actually study and does work. For example, in my freshman year of high school, I thought that I didn’t need to study for my tests and guess what happened…I failed them. After learning how failing your tests affects your grade, I started to study and do work in and out of school. I learned my lesson after my GPA dropped. I also get reminded every single day that doing good in school will give you a better future by my parents. Due to the fact that they immigrated here from China, they want whats best for me, and that is for me to get good grades in school which will lead to a good job and a better future. They always remind me to do my work and not go partying. It gets kind of annoying sometimes  but I know its for the success of my future. As you can see in my thoughts of the day, I started thinking about school work and any projects or tests I have to do. That is because I have this thing where I am more focused in the morning when I wake up than in the afternoon or night time when you’re supposed to do homework. In my opinion, I think that it is better to finish work earlier than later because I tend to forget things I have to finish sometimes. I also get distracted easily by things like television. Anyways, I think that focusing more on school work right now will benefit my future because if I do good and get a high GPA, then I will eventually get a good job that pays well. This also means that I have to take care of my health in order to focus more on school.

I also argue that my current thoughts are focused on important things like Blink Fitness, which will eventually lead to my future success in my personal life. Even though school work is important, I also think that making sure that you are healthy also plays a huge role in your future success. If you’re not focused while at school, what is the point of even going to school? Being able to concentrate and focus on your work helps you because you are able to actually learn something. You wouldn’t be able to learn anything if you are tired and fall asleep during class or get distracted easily. That is why I work out at a gym called, “Blink Fitness Gym.” I think that this place helps me better my concentration because exercising helps wake you up and that is actually true. I used to nap everyday after I get home from school up until it’s time for dinner, but that stopped when I joined Blink Fitness. I go there everyday in the afternoon and exercise for at least 2 hours and then go home. My mind is more focused and ready to work the next day which is a good thing because I usually fall asleep in class when it gets boring. Anyways, Blink Fitness will benefit to y future success because if I am healthy, I can do anything good and not get lazy. Health is a huge part of success.

Finally, I argue that my current thoughts are focused on important things like Pomme Les, which will eventually lead to my success in my professional life. I think this because work is work. I think that it is better to gain more experience when you are young because in the future, you might need these experiences to help you get hired. You will meet new people everywhere in your workplace, which will then build your connections. The more connections you have, the easier it is to find a job. And the more connections you have, you will also have a lot of useful references which are needed in most job interviews because they want to know what type or kind of person you are. It is better to make a good first impression because then they will most likely hire you and it is important you give them good references, people who you are close to and people who know you more than you know yourself. That is because if you give them a reference who you just met and they say something wrong, then that would affect the result of if you get hired or not.  In my opinion, I think that I’ve had a lot of experience throughout my high school years. I think that it is because I needed money to buy lunch and hang out with my friends so I started to tell myself I had to work because I didn’t want to depend on my parents to give me money. I feel bad every time I spend their money because they both worked hard for it. I’ve tutored in afterschool programs, worked in doctor offices, workforces, and some dessert places. Right now I am tutoring and working at a dessert place. Anyways, I think that work right now will eventually benefit my future success in my professional life because I am gaining more and more experience every time I work which is a good thing because my experiences are helpful to me.

Although school work, Blink Fitness, and Pomme Les all are a huge part of my future success, there are other things that benefit my future success. For example, my family. Without them, I wouldn’t have become who I am today, and without them telling me what is wrong and what is right, I would’ve ended up somewhere else. I’ve grown to learn about important things like what to do and what not to do because of them. Because they are much older than me, they have more experience so I tend to listen to them more often. I have faith and confidence in myself for my future success. I think that I am going on the right path; the path that will lead me to the future that I deserve.

 

Writing My Brain by Daniel DeMarco

Introduction

With this project I have been given the chance to explain my thoughts for a day. By the end of the day i had realized that all of my thoughts were in a sense related. i have included pictures to explain what i had been thinking. I also explain why my thoughts were similar and how they affect me daily and how they affect my brain consciously and subconsciously.

 

Thinking in writing

Thursday October, 2

Thought 1:  thinking of playing video games with friends

Thought 2: While playing i realize the art of the characters

Thought 3: Watching a show while getting the urge to draw the characters

Thought 5: Starting to think about school the next day

Thought 6:Decide to draw all the characters while at school tomorrow

 

Thinking Visually 

Godzilla Collection

My Godzilla Collection Including Characters I Like To Draw

WIP Drawing of Kakyoin and Hierophant Green from Jojo's Bizarre Adventure: Stardust Crusaders by me

My Drawing of Kakyoin and Hierophant Green From JoJo’s Bizarre Adventures   (W.I.P)

Tribal Style Art

Tribal Style Art I Drew

 

Thinking Rhetorically and Reflectively

My Mind

The human mind, the center of all our thoughts. The hub for all our ideas and emotions. Some people believe that they fully understand their mind and its functions but, how could this be? Every second of everyday our minds are racing with thoughts. Now while some may be obvious as to why they appear others are not so simple. Some thoughts seem to come out of nowhere. We also don’t realize many of the things that we don’t pay a lot of attention to are actually entering our minds and being processed by our subconscious. I was asked by my professor to write down some thoughts throughout the day and try to understand why some of these thoughts had occurred and what they potentially mean.

I then decided to pick a day where every few hours i would note what I was thinking at the moment. I chose a day in which i had no school due to the fact that these days are the days i have my most vivid and rapid thoughts because i wasn’t focused on the work in front of me. I went about my daily routine, eating, playing games, watching videos, talking to friends, and watching television. As stated every couple hours I wrote what i was thinking. Personally i tend to think about what i am doing at the moment and things that relate to it. So as i wrote what i thought about there was exactly that, a series of thought pertaining to what i had done during the day. Although this may seem normal there was a pattern in my thoughts.

Not only did I write what i did but i realized, wow, most of these thoughts included drawing. I had thought about drawing characters from video games, the shows i watched, and even the friends i was talking to at those moments. This is understandable because ever since i was little I loved drawing and anything artistic. This includes scenery, props, and characters.

The next day i went to class and found myself drawing. I had the urge to draw what i had seen the day before, the same stuff in my thoughts prior to that day. I didn’t think too much about it because it felt normal and natural for me like part of my daily routine. Class had ended and i had an hour and a half before my next and final class. During this time i played video games on my Nintendo 3DS. Again i found myself wanting to draw the characters in the game I was playing. The game was Kingdom Hearts Dream Drop Distance. I wanted to draw the characters, the weapons they used, and the monsters they fought.

It was then time to get to my next class, English. In class we discussed our project which is this essay i am writing right now, The one you are currently reading. The professor then proceeded to go around the room and help those who were unsure what to do and answer their questions. I decided it may be a good idea to tell him that my thoughts were like this. He explained that he noticed how often i draw in class and asked if it was a way that helped me retain information. That’s when it hit me. Throughout the years of my schooling i had always started to draw when the teacher was talking.

This may sound strange but as i thought about it i realized that doing this helped me obtain information better than directly focusing on the teacher. The reason is because when i directly focus on the teacher and the work at hand i tend to get overwhelmed and get easily bored and frustrated. When i draw during class i get into a relaxed state and feel good. I don’t feel as if as large weight is on my shoulder and i can take in information without the stress. I have always done this and even though on the outside it may seem like i’m not paying attention, I actually am and better than normal. My subconcious retains all of the information while my regular conscious notes key words or phrases which i will then write down before drawing again.

I have always been very intelligent and one of the smartest out of my friends even when it seems like i do the least amount of work or paying attention. The fact was that drawing became my outlet for learning. Even when taking those learning style tests i was always a visual and kinesthetic learner. I now know that in order to do my best i actually have to do some drawing during class in order to obtain the most information.

It’s incredible how the human mind works how simple things we think about can relate to our everyday lives. If something like drawing could affect how an individual learns imagine what other things would help. The mind is such a complex thing. We have thousands of thoughts a day, some we may not even realize due to the fact that our subconscious picks up on things we may not even notice. This is why many people belive in subliminal messages within cartoons. Most of the time the “messages” are negitive and promote violence and things of an adult nature, but what if we use them for good?

Understandably everyone is different and may not be easily affected by these “messages” but what about people like me?  People whose subconscious actually has an impact on their learning and daily life including their behavior. We have seen it before besides my case. Many people listen to music while studying and they may not even realize it but its helping them. They are learning more because they enjoy the music and it puts them in calm state of mind. If you were to learn in conditions that suit you, for example calm music and a quiet setting, it will bring you happiness, give you motivation, and a feeling of euphoria. Almost like Feng Shui or creating balance in a room that involves color, objects and light in order to calm the mind and ease the eye.

Though one may not realize it but the way a room is set up can greatly affect your thought process and state of mind. So many people should try to see what helps them. They should try to learn why they think the way they do during the day and see if it goes beyond just a thought. See if it has affected their daily routine and way of life. Once a person realizes it they will achieve more  in life and become smarter.

 

Work Cited 

DeMarco. Daniel, dandema96, “Tribal Style Art”, Flickr, 2 October,2014, 18 October,2014

DeMarco.Daniel, dandema96, “Godzilla Collection” Flickr 2 October,2014. 18 October, 2014

DeMarco.Daniel, dandema96, “WIP Drawing of Kakyoin and Hierophant Green from Jojo’s Bizarre Adventure: Stardust Crusaders by me” Flickr 2 October,2014. 18 October, 2014

Writing My Brain By Christopher Peralta

Introduction

In this project I have been able to take time and reflect on what I really think about during my every day. I was able to realize by taking pictures also writing what I actually think during the day this project seem more like an experiment. This project opened my eyes and forced me to think about me and my future.

Thinking in writing

Tuesday September 23, 2014

  • Have to get to class on time
  • Later got to help my mom with the groceries
  • Need to read this book for next English class
  • I’m bored and hungry might play Xbox
  • Just saw an interview of mayweather he makes so much money I need to make money like day one day
  • Am I really writing down my though? Is this like a diary
  • Wish I could play baseball right now
  • Don’t know why professor is making us do this but I guess it’s part of our project
  • I wonder who has more money warren buffet or bill gates
  • It sucks that city tech doesn’t have stock broker as a major
  • Music always calms me down and gets me thinking about life especially when I am listening to meek mills
  • Just seen a rap battle Charlie clips vs. tay roc it was good I think tay roc got that one
  • Wow my mom just bought a lot of food that’s good I am happy now

–          Going to sleep now good night need to wake up early tomorrow early class

Thining Visually

“A Good Day To Think”

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“Car Goals For The Future”

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“Money On My Mind”

 

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Thinking Rhetorically and Reflectively

College the first step to the real world sounds intimidating but if you have a gist of who you want to be in the future college is more like an obstacle you need to get pass. My name is Christopher Peralta but I rather be called Chris I am Dominican and live in a Dominican house hold. I am a freshman in college and I am 18 year old. I live in Bronx New York not one of the best neighborhoods but also not the worst. My motivation is to get my family out of here and move somewhere a whole lot better. The way I think is somehow unique because not only do I have an idea on who I want to be in life I also know the steps become that person. People might question that the way they think holds them back from moving on in life but my current thinking implements me to focus on the things that will enable my future success.

For an assignment our professor asked us to take pictures of something that represents our major or what we want to be in the future, the first idea I thought of was Wall Street because business is my major what other place is better than Wall Street. I had so many ideas so much famous business men I thought of right away. My mind is focus on what I need to do to become a business men someone like warren buffet or Donald trump. My current thinking implements me to focus on the things that will enable my future success because I have something you call tunnel vision and all I think about is money and making it and that’s why the picture assignment was a good example because I was so quick to think of places, people, and things that relate to business.

One picture that really stood out to me was the picture I took of Wall Street. It’s interesting because when I showed some of my peers they knew right away what my major/future was. At first that surprised me a lot because they knew instantly the message I was trying to portray but then I thought about it and said to myself like no I shouldn’t be surprised the picture was clear in the message I was trying to deliver. That let me to believe that my initial thinking is set out for me to succeed in my future.

My daily thoughts throughout a normal day varies, the reason I say that is because I wrote down some of my thoughts on a Friday and also wrote some of my thoughts on a Tuesday and they were completely different. It’s different because it depends on what you are doing that day and what is your mind focused on that day. For example on the Friday thoughts one of them was “should I get a haircut for tonight” and clearly my mind was set on that party I was going to later that night. On the Tuesday thoughts I was thinking of my books that I still need to buy and it was obvious that my mind was set on school. It’s strange that you don’t think about the same things everyday but there is some specific things that run past my mind more than once in different days and that constant reminder is what I lead the believe is my motivational factor. That’s why my current thinking implements me to focus on the things that will enable my future success.

My mindset right now in the short term is to go to college have fun and stay focused on the bigger picture. What I mean by that is don’t get too ahead of myself because you only take it one day at time. A quote from my daily thoughts was tomorrow “I have English I need to read this book”. This quote represents how my thinking if focused on the short term goal which is to read a book for my English class so I can be involved with the lesson. This is another example on how my thinking is focused on my future because even though it was a thought for my class the next morning it shows where my priority is which is school and school is a pathway or my future.

Some people may argue that some of my thoughts have nothing to do with my future. For example in one of my thoughts of the day I said “I need to help my mother with the groceries” or with the thought of “playing xbox”. Some of the quotes has nothing to do with my future or maybe it do but doesn’t benefit me but I am human and some random thoughts are going to occur. These thoughts are really more for personally issues or comfort and thoughts like these can hold you back from progressing like me wanting to play xbox instead of studying for a midterm. There also thoughts that you have to think about because they are obligations. Me thinking about helping my mother is more of an obligation than personal comfort. I would not blame society if they feel that I don’t always think about my future because I don’t always think about it.

Society is our worst judgment they always want to label a person or even tell them what they are and aren’t. What society doesn’t know is what goes on in our mind and that’s really important. Its important for the simple fact that they can’t tell you what to think about, they could persuade you to think a certain way but can’t sense what you’re actually thinking. My thinking does enable me to succeed because even though some of my thinking isn’t always about my future most of it is. Also its key to realize that it’s not always what you think it’s what you actually do and the important thing is most of the time the smart thinking I do I actually display it physically. As far as thinking it’s pretty clear that my current thinking implements me to focus on the things that will enable my future success.

Work Cited List

In conclusion, I can’t say that I am perfect because no one is but I always try to maintain my mind in the right mind set which is my future. This project has made me realize that I still need to improve on my focus but for the most part my vision for the future in my eyes is bright. Sometimes you don’t pay attention to what you think but there are thought that make you realize like how is this going to better me and those are the thoughts you need to listen to.

Cperalta [Christopher Peralta] “Re:project 1: Thinking in writing.” Openlab. ENG1101 D346 English

Composition 1, FA 2014, 19 Sept. 2014. Wed. 14 Oct. 2014

Peralta, Christopher “A Good Day To Think” Flickr. 19 Sept. 2014. Tue. 14 Oct. 2014

Peralta, Christopher “Car Goals For The Future” Flickr. 19 Sept. 2014. Tue. 14 Oct. 2014

Peralta, Christoher “Money On My Mind” Flickr. 19 Sept. 2014. Tue. 14 Oct. 2014

Writing My Brain by Fjoralba Hoxha

Introduction:

In  this  project  “Writing  my  brain”  I  will  have  the  opportunity  to  go  over  my  daily  thoughts  one  by  one  and  reflect  on  them. Throughout  this  project  we  had  the  opportunity  to  write  down  our  daily  thoughts,  pick  out  what  was  most  important  and  take  photos  that  represented  that  moment.  Then  we  had  to write  an  essay  about  our  daily  thoughts,  quoting  ourselves  or  others,  basing  on  the  photos  etc.  This  is  my  project  and  I  hope  you  enjoy  it.
THINKING in WRITING

 

FRIDAY 19th

– I am so sleepy. I seriously don’t want to go to work today. Should i take a full shower or just a body shower?

-Okay I’m taking forever to find out what to wear I’m late already.

-This bus is taking forever to come, I’m just going  to  walk there, I’ll get there in time hopefully.

-Did i text “goodmorning” to my mom today? okay, let me have a quick chat with her and tell her what’s new.

-It’s so busy here at work! And the manager is driving me crazy today. Note to self: next week when I’m off I’m going to find a new job, i think the mall is hiring.

-Finally lunch break! Can’t wait to get home and meet my boyfriend to help him shopping! Haven’t seen him for a week already.

-Since I’m going by the city what should i wear? Is it cold? Skirt or jeans?

-I had a great time on my way to 34th street. Now i hope this mall has all the stuff he needs because I’m not planning to go to e different mall everyday.

-He is driving me crazy! He likes everything and then he likes nothing. Im craving Gyros. I want to leave.

-Finally now I’m full! That gyro was heaven. Now I’m happy and full of energy

-It’s so much traffic! But at least we have time to talk and make plans for the weekend.

-Finally home I’m so tired but I have to clean and cook for my brother. I have no idea what he wants for tonight, pasta with mushrooms perhaps. I’ll just make that, is easy and it doesn’t take forever.

-Now I’m in bed. I have work tomorrow early in the morning and i have to get a good sleep. I’ll talk to my mom again and tell her what i did today, hopefully she’s awake.

-So i need to find that new job, i need to help my brother to pay the rent, lately, he’s been paying it by himself. And I’ll try to save money so i could go back to my country to visit my family in summer. I miss them so much.

-Tomorrow i have so much to do! work, go out, call my phone company, call the internet company, buy food groceries , go over the homeworks and who knows what else comes in the way.

Thinking  Visually

Work

Writing your thoughts

 

Family time

Writing your thoughts

 

Cooking  time

Cooking time

 

 

Thinking Rhetorically and Reflectively:

In  this  project  I  have  the  opportunity  to  share  with  you  my  daily  thoughts  and  to  reflect  on  them.  My  name  is  Fjoralba  Hoxha  and  I’m  a  student  in  City  College  Of  Technology,  better  known  as  City  Tech. I  am  seventeen  years  old  and  I  came  to  America  about  three  years  ago  from  a  beautiful,  small country  in Europe  called  Albania. I  moved  here  to  get  a  better  education  and  to  be  honest  I’m  very  proud  of  myself.  Even though  I  was  going  through  rough  times  I  managed  to  graduate  High  School  with  a  high  GPA  while  going  to  work  at  the  same  time, and  now  I  started  college  majoring  on  Paralegal  Assistance  1st  year  and  so  far  is  going  great. All  I  want  in  this  life  is  to  become  somebody  so  I  could   have  a  bright  future  ahead  of  me  and  to  make  my  loved  ones   happy  and  proud.  And  I’m  a  believer  as  long  as  I  push  myself  and  never  give  up  no  matter  how  hard  it  might  be. On  the  other  hand  I  argue  that  my  daily  thoughts  most  of  the  time  are  just  focused  on  the  present  and  not  much  about  the  future.

 

One  of  the  reasons  why  I  think   my  thoughts  are  focused  only  in  the  present  and  not  in  the  future  is  because  I’m  always  rushing  and  most  of  the  time  busy  so  I  don’t  have  time  to  think  much   about  what  is  going  to  happen  later  on. To  be  honest  while  I  was  writing  down  my  thoughts  almost  every  half  of  an  hour  I  was  thinking   this  project  assigned  to  me  was  pointless  since  a lot  of  people,  in  this  case  me  do  not  have  time  to  pick  up  a pencil  and  write  about  our  thoughts.  But  later  on  while  I  was  reading  over  what  I  wrote  I  realized   I  do  not  think  about  important  stuff  while  I’m  doing  something.  It’s  actually  the  total  opposite,  I  just  want  to  get  stuff  done  and  move  to  the  next  step.  I  also  realized    the  only  time  I  think  deeper  about  my  future  is  when  I’m  alone  at  night   laying   in  bed  and  making  plans.  This  fact  made  me  feel  so  bad  and  made  me  realize   I  need  improvement  otherwise  when  life  hits  me  with  something  serious  when  I  least expect  it,  I  wouldn’t  be  able  to  get  out  of  it  if  my  thoughts  aren’t  at  the  right  place.

 

Let  me  talk  about  an  example.  On  my  daily  thoughts  I  wrote “ It’s so busy here  at  work! And  the  manager  is  driving  me  crazy  today. Note  to self: next  week  when  I’m  off  I’m  going  to  find  a  new  job, I  think  the  mall  is  hiring.” (fjori96. Part 5.web)  The  way  I  see  it  on  this  sentence  the  important  thought  is  “… when I’m  off  I’m  going  to  find  a  new  job,  I  think  the  mall  is  hiring.” Now  you  would  think  that  later  on  I  got  more  information  about  the  places  that  were  hiring,  what  day  exactly  should  I  go  etc.  but  guess  what?  Based  on  my  second  sentence  written  by  me  not  more  than  thirty  minutes  later  states  “Finally  lunch  break! Can’t  wait  to  get  home  and  meet  my  boyfriend to  help  him  shopping! Haven’t  seen  him  for  a  week  already” (fjori96. Part6.web)  This  shows  me  that  my  thoughts  at  a  very  busy  time  are  just  momentarily  and  not  actual  plans  because  if  it  was  then  on  my  lunch  break  I  would  do  or  think  something  more  important  then  what  I’m  going  to  do  for  entertainment  later  on.  This  fact  makes  me  realize  that  I  should  pay  more  attention  to what  I  think.  Why  I  think  that  way?  And  what  should  I  do  to  accomplish  whatever  I  was  thinking.

 

I  personally  believe  that  another  reason  why  I  attend  to  not  pay  much  of  attention  to  my  thoughts  is  because  I  get  distracted  very  quickly  by  entertainment devices,  websites  and  people.  Even  though  I  might  be  busy  at  work  or  in  the  house  or  with  homeworks,  parts  of  my  mind  are  thinking  about  what  is  new  on  Instagram  or  what  is  new  on  Facebook.  Did  someone  hit  me  up?  Did  anyone  send  me  a  friend  request? These  type  of  thoughts  make  you  forget  the  important  stuff  or  get  distracted  and  also   lose  focus. And  I  am  pretty  sure  that  I  am  not  the  only  one,  based  on  what  I  see  everyday  on  the  streets,  I  rarely  see  two  people  making  a conversation,  most  of  the  time  I  see  people  of  any  age  keeping  their  head  down  and  being  focused  on  the  electronic  device  and  not  what  is  actually  going  on  around  them. And  obviously  I  am  one  of  them  and  this  makes  me  sick.  Since  I  do  not  live  with  my  parents  but  only  with  my  brother,  I  attend  to  always  check  my  phone  and  see if  one  of  my  family  members  texted  me.  Me  talking  to  my  mom  is  an  everyday  routine  and   I’m  very  happy  that  it  is. To  be  honest  she  means  more  than  the  world  to  me  and  I  thank  God  that  now  a days  we  have  every  type  of  way  to  communicate  with  our  loved  ones  to  a  different  continent.  (hoxha.Photo2.“familytime”)  But  then  again  even  though   for  me   talking  to  my  mother  and  family  is  like  therapy, it  requires  time  and  effort. Because  maybe  at  that  time  I  could’ve  been  doing  some  house  work, cook  for  my brother  or  use  the  extra  time  to  study  and  accomplish  the  important  assignments  without  rushing.

 

As  I  said  on  my  first  paragraph  I  noticed  that  my  deep  thoughts  and  actual plans  for  the  future  happen  at  night  when  I’m  alone  and  around  me  is  quiet. For  example  on  my  day  of  thoughts  I  wrote  “So I  need  to  find  that  new  job, I  need  to  help  my  brother  to  pay  the  rent, lately , he’s  been  paying it  by  himself. And  I’ll  try  to  save  money  so  I  could  go  back  to  my  country to  visit  my  family  in the  summer. I  miss  them  so  much” (fjori96.part14.web) and  also  about  thirty  minutes  later  I  wrote  “Tomorrow  I  have so much to do! Work , go  out,  call  my  phone  company,  call  the  internet  company,  buy  food groceries ,  go  over  the  homeworks  and  who  knows  what  else  comes  in  the  way.” (fjori96.part15.web) I  read  these  two  statements  over  and  over  the  day  after  and  realized  that  in  around  one  hour  I  only  thought  about  my  desires,  thoughts, and   plans  for  my  future.  This  makes  me  question  myself  why  don’t  I  focus  more  on  my  thoughts  like  I  do  when  I’m  alone  at night. The  first  impression  that  you  give  means  a  lot  in  life  and  if  people  see you  as  someone  who  is  always  rushing,  moving  and  not  thinking  twice  before they  do  something,  well, definitely  you  won’t  give  a  good  first  expression  and  that  fact  does  not  help  you  move  forward  in  life.

 

In  conclusion, I  believe  that  this  project  will  change  the  way  I  think  for  sure.  Going  over  all  my  thoughts  made  me  realize  that  my  thoughts  are  more  focused  at  the  present  and  not  much  at  the  future, except  when  I’m  alone.  Which  from  now  on  even  though  I  might  be  very  busy  I  will always  try  to  pay  attention  to  my  own  thoughts  and  try  to  accomplish  them  as  soon  as  I  can.  Because  only  like  this  I  will  be able  to  accomplish   my  goal  in  life.

 

                                                                  Work cited

Fjori96 [Fjoralba Hoxha].”Re:Project1:Thinking in Writing.”   Openlab.English1101D346. English Compostion1 Fall 2014.Web.15 October 2014.

Hoxha,Fjoralba “Work” Flickr.web.15October2014

Hoxha,Fjoralba “Family time” Flickr.web. 15October2014

Hoxha,Fjoralba “Cooking time” Flickr.web. 15 October2014

Writing My Brain Project by Ivan Melo

Introduction

In this project, I had the opportunity to write down my thoughts for a full day and reflect on how my mind worked. I was able to get a better understanding of myself and learned how and what I could do to plan my thoughts to be more effective. Aside from the notes I made every 30 minutes about what I was thinking about in the moment, I also took pictures and they helped me even more to understand that although at first my thoughts seemed to be meaningless and unorganized, I was actually focusing on accomplishing my short term and long term goals more than I had thought.

Thinking In Writing

6:00 I just woke up and today is going to be a busy day for me. I have to be in school at 8:30 to take my psychology exam and then I have to leave school early to take my road test. Hopefully I’ll be able to make it back in time to get to my Algebra class.

6:30 I barely had any sleep last night but surprisingly I have a lot of energy. I am so excited about taking my psychology exam. I studied really hard and I am really confident that I am going to do well on it. I’m going to get ready for school soon but I forgot to charge my iPad.

7:00 I just finished eating breakfast and I am about to leave my house in a few minutes. I am really excited about taking my psychology exam. I studied really hard for it and I hope to do really well on it. I also have to take my road test but I’m not too worried about it.

7:30 I’m waiting at the train station right now. I went to the station by my house and they were doing construction. The trains were going express so I had to walk all the way to Marcy Ave. I know I’m going to be late anyway and I have a long day ahead of me so I’m just going to take things one step at a time today.

8:00 I’m on the train right now and I think I might make it to the exam on time. I’m only 3 stops away. I know I have to take my psychology exam as soon as I get to school but I don’t know why I keep thinking about my road test which is a few hours away.

9:30 I just got out of school and I’m feeling confident that I did well on the test. Now I have to go home drop my book bag off and then go to take my road test. Now that I have to take it I dont know why but I don’t really feel excited about taking it. I’m not nervous about it I just kind of lost all the enthusiasm I had before. I guess its just because I’m tired.

10:00 I’m at the train and apparently there are no trains passing at Jay Street station “Due to an ongoing Police Investigation” Hopefully the problem gets resolved because I really don’t want to be late for my road test. If there are still no trains coming by 11:00 I’ll just take a cab home.

10:30 Still waiting for the train

11:00 An A train passed by and its going local so I can finally go home after all this waiting.

11:30 Waiting for the M train and then I can probably get something to eat before I take my road test.

12:00 I just got home I’m hungry but I don’t know what I should get.

12:30 I just took a picture of one of the things that I sometimes take for granted. My view of the city just makes me so excited and hopeful that one day I will go to Japan. I’m going to leave my house now to go and take my road test.

1:00 I’m waiting at the driving school and I just don’t feel nervous at all which is weird. The other people taking it today look really nervous and some of them are actually taking for like their 3rd time. I really hope I do well today.

1:30 I’m on my way to Red Hook to take my test now. This is taking a lot longer than I thought it would.

2:00 I’m waiting to take my test still so there’s no way I’m going to make it back to school in time to go to Math.

2:30 I think I’m next to go.

3:00 I’m finally next to take the road test. If I pass I can go anywhere I want to but if I don’t pass all I have to do is take it again. I am literally the last person to take it. All the students from the the other driving schools already took it including mine.

3:30 I passed the test and got my temporary license I’m happy and everything but its just me and my driving instructor here. It makes me think about how many people are around me in school and at home yet I am in a sense alone. I guess it is possible to be alone in a room full of people. I can see now that nobody can help me accomplish goals its really just me.

4:00 There was a lot of traffic on the way back to the driving school but I can finally go home.

4:30 I’m at home right now with my dog Tashi. I might seem lame but I talked to my dog and told her about all the things that happened to me today. It may seem unbelievable but she seemed like she understood what I was saying since she usually never barks and now she was barking and wagging her tail and running around me.

5:00 I called my mom and she was emotional about me getting my license. I still haven’t eaten so she said she would bring something from one of my favorite restaurants, Pollos Mario.

5:30 In the meantime i took Tashi for a walk around McCarren Park. When I got home I turned my TV on and it was giving one of my favorite shows, Attack On Titan. The introduction of the show always reminds me of how much I really want to got to Japan.

6:00 They’re giving a marathon of Attack On Titan but I’m really tired so I’m going to take a nap.

8:00 I heard my mom coming in with my sister so I just woke up.

8:30 Eating with my mother and sister

9:00 Just finished eating and we are going to go to my aunt’s house to see my little cousin Ryan.

10:00 My aunt wants to walk her dogs so I go home to get Tashi and then we all go together to walk them around the park.

10:30 we say goodbye to my aunt and go home.

11:00 I think about all the things I did today. I cant believe I actually got my license on my first try.

 

Thinking Visually

https://www.flickr.com/photos/127945462@N06/15542581075

Picture of the view from my bedroom window

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Attack On Titan

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Picture of my temporary license and Mishka wallet

Thinking Reflectively and Rhetorically

My name is Ivan Melo and I am a freshman student at City Tech majoring in Radiology. After a day of recording my thoughts every 30 minutes, I was able to learn more about myself that I didn’t realize before. After reading what I wrote I noticed several things like the fact that my thoughts were random and tended to focus mostly on things happening in the present but still with goals that I am slowly working on. After my day of recording I was able to find something that all my thoughts had in common. I noticed that although my thoughts seemed to be random and unorganized, they were a gestalt and everything I thought about reminded me of my long term goals which include going to Japan and becoming a radiologist . Aside from that I also noticed that I try to stay positive even though I prepare the worst.

One of the things that led me to the conclusion that my thoughts are a gestalt was that while individually my thoughts appeared to be meaningless, I was constantly thinking about what I could do to complete my short term goals and at the same time work on my long term goals. Like most people, I had thoughts that were focusing on what I was doing in the present but subconsciously I was working on completing the current tasks I had while simultaneously preparing for the next task. An example of something that made me notice that I unknowingly think and work on my long term goals was one of the notes I made that says, “I’m finally next to take the road test. If I pass I can go anywhere I want to but if I don’t pass all I have to do is take it again.” At first this note I made didn’t mean much but when I read it again I also noticed that I am always prepared to handle anything that may happen to me in a calm and somewhat nonchalant manner. I learned from this note that while I may seem like a pessimistic person, I am just down to earth and focus on the reality of things.

Another thing that made me notice that my thoughts are a gestalt is another note I made before I took my psychology exam. Most people would be nervous before taking an exam but that particular day I didn’t feel any stress at all. I wrote, “The trains were going express so I had to walk all the way to Marcy Ave. I know I’m going to be late anyway and I have a long day ahead of me so I’m just going to take things one step at a time today.” This shows that my thoughts focus on things happening in the present but since I planned my day out already I was preparing for the next event beforehand. On that day, I took my psychology exam and after I finished, I went directly to Red Hook to take my road test. Perhaps it was a way my brain was able to cope with stress but I focused on only the present task and nothing else.

I also took a picture of the temporary license which for me was symbolic. In the picture you can see the temporary license and my wallet from my favorite clothing brand. This reminded me of my goal of going to Japan since my favorite brand has a store in Japan that is very popular. To me both of those items together were signs that showed I was making progress towards my goals and also showed me that I am becoming more mature. Overall, I have a low self esteem so although to most people this might not seem significant, to me this really boosted my self esteem. I felt confident and more determined to continue to make my dreams come true since I had actually made progress. This picture reflects my idea that my thoughts are a gestalt because its just a picture of a temporary license with just a random wallet but to me that was MY temporary license and proof that I had accomplished some of my goals which reassured me that I should stay positive and keep working hard to do the things that I enjoy.

The second photo I took was of the view from my bedroom which also led me to my conclusion that although my thoughts seemed unorganized and random they were a gestalt focused on my long term goals. The photo shows the Manhattan skyline and the building that stands out the most to me is the Freedom Tower. I took the picture since it is something I look at every night before I go to sleep and in a way inspires me to keep working toward my goal. The design of the building is very modern and I thought about how much more futuristic the buildings look in Tokyo. I took the picture the same day I did my day of recording my thoughts so one note I made was,” I just took a picture of one of the things that I sometimes take for granted. My view of the city just makes me so excited and hopeful that one day I will go to Japan.” This note reminded me of one of the things that makes me happy whenever I think about it, no matter how I am feeling at the moment. I learned that from now on everything I do I have to do by myself and for myself.

The last photo I took was one of my living room TV when it was giving one of my favorite shows. It is important to me because beside the fact that it is my favorite show, it was originally aired in Japan and I am very interested in how Japanese culture is. The show is fictional however many scenes are shown throughout the series that show the cities.  That day I can honestly say was one of the most memorable for me since it seemed like everything was going good for me. I took this final photo at the end of the day and reflected on the notes I had made throughout the day. This shows that my thoughts are a gestalt because I can think and do a lot of things but I always seem to be determined and focused on my long term goals and things that are more important than the events in the present. I know that sometimes things don’t always go as planned but I think I am going to continue to take things one step at a time while still trying to plan and secure my future.

To sum up, after recording my thoughts every 30 minutes for a day, I learned that although I may seem to have random thoughts mostly about present situations, I still focus on long term goals I have and stay motivated to achieve them. I considered the collection of my thoughts a gestalt because individually the notes I made had almost no meaning but when you look at them as a whole they hold a lot of more significance. I truly enjoyed this project since it gave me time to reflect on the things that I do and think about. It allowed me to see myself how other people see me and how I am perceived. I also was able to learn how to think in a way that can help me to become more successful in the future. This project also helped me to be more assured that everything takes time and I am doing a good job at accomplishing my goals while not thinking too far ahead.

Works Cited

Melo,Ivan.”Picture of the view from my bedroom window”Flickr. 13 Oct. 2014. Mon. 13 Oct. 2014

Melo,Ivan.”Attack On Titan”Flickr. 13 Oct. 2014. Mon. 13 Oct. 2014

Melo,Ivan.”Picture of my temporary license and Mishka wallet”Flickr. 13 Oct. 2014. Mon. 13 Oct. 2014

Project One Debriefing, In-Class Writing Exercise

After you write your chapter summary and we have our student-led presentation, we will spend the rest of the time discussing and writing about Project One.

During class, take out a clean sheet of paper (with no torn perforations).

Write your name at the top of the page on the right corner.

Think about Project One (what you accomplished, how you accomplished it, and how it turned out).

Write an essay that makes an argument to me about what your grade on the assignment should be. First, write your thesis/argument statement (what grade you should receive). Second, evaluate your Project One submission as evidence for the grade that you believe you deserve. Third, describe what you would have done differently to make your Project One better than it currently is.

Leave your essay on the table as you leave class.