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Shitty first drafts by Anne Lamott double edge journal entry

Quote #1: “practically even better news than that of short assignments is the idea of shitty first drafts. All good writers write them. This is how they end up with good second drafts and terrific third drafts.”

My response: While I don’t know if this statement is entirely true it would make sense that once you have your ideas laid out before you can play around with the material. And the more you fine tune it the better the out come is

Quote #2: “all I had to do was write a really shitty first draft, of lets say the opening paragraph (to get started on her writing)”

My response: I would say that it seems like a good idea although me personally I take out a piece of paper and write whatever comes to my mind.

Quote #3: “the whole thing would be so long and incoherent and hideous that for the rest of the day id obsess about getting creamed by a car before I could write a decent second draft”

My response: great I feel a lot better about my writing now that I know its not just me and most even “professional” writers have a bad first draft.

Quote #4: “then a month later when it was time for another review (Anne Lamott used to write food reviews for a publication) the whole process would start again complete with fears that people would find my first draft before I could rewrite it”

My response: it feels reassuring that us students still start out the same as accomplished writers even thought they have much more experience we all start with that shitty first draft.

Charles Pessin

Shitty First Drafts DEJ

TEXT/QUOTE THOUGHTS
“The right words and sentences just do not come pouring out like ticker tape most of the time.” As much as I would love to be able to write effortlessly with the right words and sentences forming in my head, as said in the text, it just sometimes does not happen.
“The first draft is the child’s draft, where you let it all pour out and then let it romp all over the place, knowing that no one is going to see it and that you can shape it later. You just let this childlike part of you channel whatever voices and visions come through and onto the page.” By doing this, all ideas can be written down and condensed into a sheet of paper which can be referred back to when writing the second draft.
“Eventually I’d go back and sit down at my desk, and sigh for the next ten minutes. Finally I would pick up my one-inch picture frame, stare into it as if for the answer, and every time the answer would come.” Distractions can be helpful! Inspiration can be drawn from anywhere, giving yourself time before restarting to write is okay.
“Almost all good writing begins with terrible first efforts. You need to start somewhere. Start by getting something – anything – down on paper.” Agreed, do not neglect the baby steps as they help you achieve your goals.

 

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